Falling Nova: Grim Rapier

[David]

Basically, There were 2 uncompleted games. They sucked.
I'm not linking to them. Now, This is the first completed (Hopefully)
Game in the series.

"Yes, He just disappeared with It! And yes, it's handle was
kindof like a skull..."
~ Maylin, Snowvaia Castle, Area 2, 1st House
"It scared me!! He ran off During the night, who is it to
serve the king!?"
Matro King-shun, Snowvaia News Reporter

His Cold, wet fingers were stroking through the pond. it was
crystal clear today, he thought. The sun shone bright on the
morning dew of the grass. he lifted his index finger from
the pond and ran his cold, wet finger through his hair Idly.
"There's nothing to do today, Though..." When 2 Samurais
And a man in black came to him. "Reports of the Rapier
being stole!" He, Named Shintre (The boy, Not the Samurais
or caped man) Saluted his captain."Archers attackinbg the area.
Xel leads them. "Hm? Archers are attacking us, saying they're
sent by Xel King-shun?! Maybe They're lying.. Or it might be
Matro commanding them!"
"... No, I don't think, Shintre."
"Well, I left my Blade And Bow with Matro."
"... Just great. Shintre, Your one of my best, Boy."
"I guess I can try with just a shortsword.. Did you bring
your spare, Spartha?"
(Spartha being the black caped man. Shen and shem are the
samurais, by the way.)
"Yes.. Whatever."
"... Okay. I'm going now." He slowly walked off.

So, The storyline.
There was a powerful force, it created the grass, the land,
the lava, the earth, teh desert, the water, the ice.. the fire,
The elements.. It created everything. Everything but people.
It was struck by a mysterious force, which appeared to
be the Guardian force of another world. it lost the battle,
but created The grim Rapier.... This combined the very
essence of both worlds, and a link between them.
It was brought into a chamber by what remained of both
forces, a shine emited as it was brought to the Pedestal,
The ground shook, and lines surrounded the Pedestal,
And Blue Energy shook through these lines, which is what
They now know as A combination of their world's essence,
mana, And The other world's essence, Darkona.  This connected
the two worlds, but was being used by civillains as a force
for power... Little did they know the link between the Worlds
were Servering.. A Queen, Named Gwen, Ruled over the west
Half of the first world mentioned (Called Seryven.) And the
other world is Konia. The Head servant of Gwen asked for
Her ring, Wondering if it had any properties. He realized
he could rule the land if it did, And when she took it off,
it seemed that she shrieked, And she turned into large piles
of dust. The guards then attempted to Seize him, but he
was too quick. He got away, With her ring. He then went
to his chamber. where he put the ring on and prayed,
"Rapier, Grant your humble servant Gwen's powers, Grant
me the cold heart, Grant me everything.. I bring the ring,
And Now I should be allowed to emit your power.. Take me!!"
He was then, slowly sucked into the statue, where he found
the rapier's chamber, after many long, hard, days He managed
to find the rapier, and now he has total control... He is Xel.
He then went somewhere I don't want to spoil for you by
harnessing the rapier's power.

[MrMister]

Sounds good, but I suggest not using the name 'mana'.