Bretheren Steel

[ZeroKirbyX]

Okay, I'm going to post character, item, plot ideas for my game and I would like some help on removing all cliches.
Stroy and a brief explanation of the 6 races are her:
http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=9612&forumid=11&catid=4
I decided to make a new one and keep it up instead of bumping the old ones..

Characters:
Sengal- Half Blood
Age: 19
Class: Warrior
Weapon: Hades Bane- Broadsword
Desc: Child of the forbidden combination of a Dei' Chak blood with "fool's blood"(any race not dei chak). His Dei' Chak name means "forsaken"because of his mixed blood. Although he looks like a human, he holds certain Dei' Chak features such as great height and strength, fangs, and wings, but he lacks the natural armor most have. Due to the Dei' Chajk blood in him, he can weild the Hades Bane with his right arm.

Reishin- Dei' Chak
Age: 19
Class: Warrior Mage
Weapon: None, but since a Dei' Chak can't naturally cast spells he carries an ancient bark from the Kao (extinct magic tree) tree in a bracelet.
Desc: Only friend of Sengal. His Dei' Chak name means "Lost Child" because he was raised by two people in the nearby village  until the age of 6. He was found when the Dei' Chaks raided the village. Because of his different upbringing he lacks the viciousness of the other members of the clan.

Eiphen Citadel- Human
Age: 20
Class: Monk
Weapon: Ancestral Point- Rapier
Wielder of the Ancestral Point, he is the last member of the Ancestral Covenant. He joins Sengal after finding him lost in his forest. Raised his whole life by monks, he is a very religious man but will use his sword to "cleanse the sinners".

Hrein- Magonian
Age: 22
Class: Gladiator
Weapon: Heavy blade
Desc: Due to the violent mentality of Magonian society, battle is a large part of life. Hrein is a gladiator in the colisseum with hair completely covering his right eye and half of his left as a handicap, as long hair represents a great gladiator. H epairs up with Sengal and Eiphen to claim the Pyros Hulk after he is defeated in a colisseum match by Eiphen.

Oz- Dwarf
Age: 83
Class: Farmer
Weapon: Old battle axe he uses as a plow
Due to the active lifestyle and healthy diet of the dwarves, they have incredible longevity and aging, Oz only looks to be in his 30's. An old soldier, he went AWOL right before the attack that wiped out his platoon. For the last 60 years he has lived his life as a simple farmer, miles away from any other dwarven colony.

Ryuku- Elf
Age: 24
He carries the other twin blade, the Zephyr Shiv. Sent with his sister to explore the outside world, he and she were separated until he found her when he joined up with Sengal.

Ryoko- Elf
Age: 17
Class: Ninja
Weapon: Gale Shiv- Katana
She carries one of the win blades, the Gale Shiv. She and her brother Ryuku were sent as messengers to explore the world below the floating elven capital.Separated from her brother, she is reunited with him when he joins Sengal's company.

Tenir- Mermaid
Age: 19
Class: Priestess
Weapon: Staff, chakram
She weilds no sacred blade but does posess the Alchemists Chain, an item which is held above the Atlantean Spear by the merpeople. Given the responsibility of gaurding the great sea beast Leviathan, she's forced to tag along with Sengal and company by the head priest when they must retrieve the Aquarius Spear.

[Solid]

Sounds delicious! YUMMM
Post more stuff so i can learn more more more!!!

[ZeroKirbyX]

Thanks, I'm gonna update this as I get new stuff for my game.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Here's the ancestral, hades, pyros, zephyr and gale. I like all of em but I'm still unsure of the zephyr and gale.  If anybody'd like to help I still need the Terran Edge(axe) and the Poseidon Staff(Spear).

[ZeroKirbyX]

After working for a few days I realized that I don't remember much from 2 years ago so now I'm going to be working on a new game, "Squippy Qwest" to try and get my groove back. It will star these guys:

[SleepAid]

Sweet.


Dude... You have ****ing awesome handwriting.
Just a little nit-pick, the hades sword would be near impossible to weild. The hand guard would be tearing away a lot of your arm while your fighting. Just letting you know.

By the way, what do those runes mean?

[ZeroKirbyX]

The runes stand for blood, flesh, and bone. Basically it's because the swords are made of the flesh and bone of the corresponding dragon and the blood is required to ressurect them.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Okay, my ma finally ley me get ungrounded from compy (yes, I have been on, but I shouldn'ta been) and my PC is now hooked back up so, UPDATES!!! Still no internet on it though. During this time I've made random stuff and ideas so I'll post em as soon as I find my Palm.

But to start off here's a new char:
Mikael Falconis Lombardi- Human
Age: 30
Class: Alchemist
Weapon: Boomstick (Shotgun, but it s the only one so he calls it a boomstick. Yeah, too much Evil Dead...)
Desc: A hermit that lives in a cabin near Clymeria. The more traditional alchemist, his house is cluttered with jars and vials. Inventor of the Boomstick, the first weapon to take high advantage of black powder, he becme a hermit to avoid nations who wish to control the black powder as he does.

I'll probably update the other chars.

[kodakumi]

a cliched thing you dont wanna have, is a revenge story.


you also see alot of


heros been sent out to save the world from being consumed by utter chaos.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Yeah, it's not really revenge. He steals it just to spite the Dei' Chak leader, that's kinda why in the first part he doesn't know what the hell he's doing.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Still no screens, (Awwwww) but a new char.

Alvarez- Human
Age: 27
Class: Theif
Weapon: Dagger
Desc: Leader of the rebellion Clymeria, not much is known about her but she bears some connection to Mikael.

[AsakuraHao2004]

Get some screens, damn you.

[blackskullwarlock]

Originally posted by AsakuraHao2004
Get some screens, damn you.

I heavily second that! Get some screenies or we shall eat you  

[ZeroKirbyX]

Originally posted by blackskullwarlock

quote:

Originally posted by AsakuraHao2004 Get some screens, damn you.

I heavily second that! Get some screenies or we shall eat you  

Hey, if you can find a spot that hasn't been nibbled off yet, go ahead.

I really need to get internet to my PC so I can upload screenies. DAMN YOU EMPTY WALLET!!!!!

[Dragonchick93]

haha funny