The Eternum saga: Book one (Soul Destined)

[Leon_1990]

thanks ^^

The face sets are incomlpete right now, and i 'm still looking for a decent one for Itaka...

Thankx 4 the complaints about the CMS,I Might just give it a complete overhaul and make it more attractive, I was thinking of using pictures or something for it...

[RPG LORD]

Where the hell can I find the demo? The link doesn't seem to adress to the right page.

[Leon_1990]

http://rapidshare.de/files/2113631/Soul_Destined.zip.html

it SHOULD be working.... tell me if it isnt...

[RPG LORD]

Oh, I found it at the bottom of the page.
Sorry, didn't notice it.
There's something wrong with the sound list. There are two with the name of a Final Fantasy III sound but they're actually from Final Fantasy VI. In what kind of age did you find those?

[Leon_1990]

sound list?

[RPG LORD]

The sound folder.
Oh, and that quote at the beginning was actually 'Reluctance to forgive has long been a human failing. It is in man's nature to sin, yet you answer sin with violence upon violence. Is that not itself a sin?'
I guess I messed up when I put that in my sig once. It is said by the spirit of the Emperor of Palamecia in the GBA version of Final Fantasy II, in the addon game of it.

[Leon_1990]

ah ok ^^, I'm gonna take that out anyway...

[RPG LORD]

Ah ok.

[Robotam]

Robotam's review time

Alright, my first words goes like this...
I think you may have released the demo a little too early, probably because you so much wanted everyone's reviews and good comments. But this is also a good thing since it says that I must have enjoyed this demo because I didn't want it to end., you see. ^_^

 Graphics:
The graphics were actually one of my favorites parts. What I liked with this was that you have graphics for so much, you have so many kinds of face directions for all characters for an example. And I think that makes the game look a lot cooler. The only hing I didn't like was that I didn't see any custom made resources in the demo (Or maybe I'm just blind and didn't notice). Custom made resources is ot really a have too but I still think it gets kind of fun when you never has seen like a special charaset in the demo that you've never seen anywhere else. That's why I edited my two main characters from my game, I know they're not custom but they're unique since no one else has them in that color. But I still didn't notice in any place in the game a resource that I didn't like. The graphics you used was perfect for this game.
Rating: 8/10

 Storyline/plot:
This was one of the things that I didn't really like. You never really got to know the storyline because the demo was too short. And in short demos it's not really a good thing too play as too many different characters all the time. First in the intro it was his Janus guy, and then it was the main character and the little goblin and soon after that it was some kind of prince or something. I mean for a 10-15 minutes long game that's too much at once, I'm not saying I hate different storylies because I actually love them, but this was a little too much at once. It would have been good if the demo would have been longer but now that it wasen't it got kind of confusing. That a little why I wanted the demo to be longer, you know sometimes you have to be patient with releasing the first demo. :p
Rating: 5/10

 Music:
Also a part that I really enjoyed, the music was inspireing as it should be. And  didn't notice any midi that was placed into the wrong scéne or something. Well, not much else to say. *thumbs up*
Rating: 9/10

 Mapmaking:
Finally to my area! The mapmaking was also inspireing and very good. Though I did notice in some places that it could use more stones or something like that. Some places could use some details but not too much. But other done the minor detailing there was nothing that bothered my at all.
Rating: 8/10

 Gameplay:
Well, you had a nice CMS and you managed to make the original BS to look pretty good, but I think the cave could use some nice puzzles. I love puzzles, because it was a little much like I could just walk through the whole cave. I know it was the first cave and it's suppose to be easy but one puzzle challenge wouldn't hurt?
But other than that I didn't find much that I didn't like. Oh, yeah... It was alittle too short to so I didn't get to experience so much gameplay, but still pretty nice.
Rating: 7/10

 Last words:
Not much too say, just make the next demo a lot longer than this one so we can understand what everything's about. Though exept from some of these negative parts I enjoyed the demo very much and I really look forward to the next one.
Complete rating: 7/10

[ff7rules]

i just tryed to play u game but it wont work it says sumthin about a vechile

[RPG LORD]

Certainly, I liked the demo.
ff7rules, could it be that you have the wrong translation of RPG Maker? With mine it worked perfectly.

[Leon_1990]

Yeah. you muast have the wrong rpgmaker...probably one of those "altered"ones.

To fix this, either reinstall another rpgmaker 2003, or go into my system adn change teh rtp vehicles to anything i have on my chars...

heh ^^ thanks for the review robotam :p

[ff7rules]

i dont no i have te englsh version so maybe?

[Leon_1990]

yeah perhaps, I'll tel you what to do over msn

[Leon_1990]

ok  here we go:

everything on the first page, i have gotten rid of
but dont worry its still gonna be the same quality of game ^^

I have decided to do my game in "Parts" to help reduce filsizes and such, I know some of you may disagree with this, but its my choice...

Anyways, Part 1 focuses on the war between Alanica and Ethica.
and THIS time, I'll give you a little bit about Leon, hes one of the mercenaries that King Vangel Hires to counter the Ethican forces making thier way over teh domino plains.

I know this may sound cliche', but dont worry there willb e a LOT of anti-cliches too ^^

You will also be able to get a better grip of the characters and the story, and I will try to mix personalities this time (But, dont worry dragonium, Persus will still be the same ^^)

well, onceI have everything sorted out, I'll post about it ,and new screens 2 ^^