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~Calvern~
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The Shadow Talisman
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July 22, 2005, 03:33:30 PM »
Hey all. I posted my story in the games section, heres a quick copy paste of it...
Every 60 years, a dark angel is born among earth. These dark angels look like any other human but the only difference is that they have black wings, a much longer lifespan, and many unique powers deep within them that can be unlocked through training. Training can only be obtained by an Elder, a much older Dark Angel. The humans despise these angels. They believe them to be evil and possibly angel outcasts thrown out of heaven. But they got it all wrong. Over 300 years ago there was a war among Human and Dark Angels. Noone knows who won this war. Some would say that human won. Some would say that the dark angels are just waiting to regain their forces. Noone knows. It has been about 60 years since the last sighting of a dark angel. Somewhere on earth there will be another to add to their population.
A boy named Shaden has been born a Dark Angel. He discovers at the age of 5 that his grandfather is also a dark angel and is taught much of his race, the human race, and the war years ago. After a while, his training finally begins. One of the powers his grandfather taught him is to pull his wings inside of his back, and be able to retract them back out to disguise himself among the humans. Yet, there are pros and cons to this power. Yes, it's a great disguise...but there powers are then limited when this is done.
Shaden is now a 12 year old boy and his grandfather has taught him everything he knew. He has even mastered flight and swordsmanship at a much younger age then most of his kind. Shaden now sleeps within his house and he awakes to see his whole town ablaze. He steps out and is in a ghost town. His town seems to eb deserted, but to the right he spots his grandfather, no wings out, with a sword in his back. He falls to his knees and sees a couple bandits walking towards him. He quickly jumps up and hovers as he unsheeths he sword. He kills off one of the bandits, but what seems to be the head of these bandits puts up a tough fight. Throughout the fight Shaden dodges and strikes with fierceness within his heart, avenging his grandfathers death. Suddenling, he is slashed across his chest, from left shoulder to right hip. He is left there with a large wound as the bandit leaves him there to die. But he doesn't know of these angels powers to heal quickly. Shaden awakes the next morning with a large scar where he was stiken the night before and sees nothing but smoke around him, and in the place of his grandfathers corpse, a pile of ashes and a sword on the ground. Shaden runs to the forest as long as his legs can hold him up. As he suddenly drops to his knees, tears stream down his face. Suddenly he hears a voice inside his head. " Shaden, it is I. Your grandfather. Quit your crying and get up... NOW! Go back to the town, you must reach deep within my pile of ashes. I will contact you later with more information." Once he gets to this pile a light wind starts to blow against the ashes and they move nowhere. He reaches in this pile and feels a hard disturbence within the pile of ash. He grasps the unknown item and pulls it out of nowhere. It seems to be a necklace with a large medalian. There are some etched markings on the side of this medalion. It reads, " The Shadow Talisman".
Would like some help with making sprites for these characters...
Name: Shaden (Main Character)
Race: Dark Angel
Age: Changes throughout the game.
Bio: A newly born dark angel, out to avenge his grandfathers death and discover the secrets and reasons for this Shadow Talisman found within his grandfathers ashes.
(For shaden a sprite with black wings. For him i'd need a 5, 12, and possibly 30ish year old sprites so a couple sprites that look different ages and other than that black wings would be nice. He wields a long sword)
Name: Greken
Race: Dark Angel
Age: Unknown
Bio: Greken sides as the grandfather to Shaden. He is defeated early on, but remains in contact with shaden throughout the game/story in a way, unknown.
(For Greken, all i ask for is an older man with black wings, also as a ghost would be nice, no weapon)
Name: Jacer
Race: Unknown ( You'll see within the game/story )
Age: Unknown
Bio: Unknown ( You'll see within the game/story )
(Sorry bout the unknown but if i gave info with this guy, it would give some key matters away so i'll just leave you guessing)
(For Jacer a middleaged man possibly with black wings as well but his wings kinda like bat wings, a lil bony. But different from Grekens and Shadens when theirs looks just like regular angel wings, only black He'll also wield a sword, but have it look different then shaden's)
Name: Drake
Race: Human
Age: 38
Bio: Head of the Legion of Bandits. They are out to destroy all dark angels plagueing their land.
(For Drake, be creative with your own ideas, only thing i ask for is a bandana and no wings, this ones human
lol He wields 2 daggers)
Any help with this would be great, thanks all!
~Calvern~
EDIT:I did post it in games and it is a request, i just copy and pasted that there so if someone could make the sprites, it would help them get a better picture of the ideas I have going for the chars.
Thanks for noticing that though, im sure others have too
And im sorry if it's a really long post
im sure lots have noticed that too, but yes, it is in the games section
Any help with this would be greatly appreciated and for a reward I cld add your name in my game and in the credits...thanks!
~Calvern~
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