Archen Storm

[EvilShadowX1]

I was thinking of a game to make and I had a starter set for a new airfix range called ROBOGEAR. I made myself a little template for writing out BASIC info for the game, and I came up with the info
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Basic Info Template
Game Name:: Archen Storm
(Use:-: to add a subtitle EG. Romans:-: The Wars Against Hannibal)

Basic Story:: It is the 500th century, and the universe is at war, The reason, planets are now getting overcrowded. Rival planets fight each other for Resources and Control. The main armies in these wars are Beta Pyre, Vola Wave and Archen Storm. The wars ravage on, and one young elarstin in the Archen Storm army prepares for his first mission in enemy territory

Basic Character Info::

Good

Name: ?? Sturm (You name him)
Age: 14
Class / Job: Elarstin (Spy/Soldier)
Race: Human
Origin: Planet Archen
Background: His whole life has been mainly sadness, his house destroyed by the Vola Wave, which he luckily survived, but his mother didn’t. His dad died when he was 10, shot down by the Beta Pyre. Now 14, he has a hatred for both armies which is the main reason he joined the army.

Name: Amelia Jose
Age: 14 ½
Class / Job: Weapon Tech
Race: Human
Origin: Planet Vola
Background: She began life on Planet Vola but her family travelled to Archen when Vola started to increase tax price. She has become a great friend to Sturm and after his dad died, her father let him live with them. She became a Weapon Tech when Sturm joined the army to help him by making his weapons stronger.

Bad

Name: Nial Vola
Age: 53 ½
Class / Job: President of Vola Wave
Race: Vikan
Origin: Planet Vikan
Background: This president wormed his way in from a poor family by gaining the old president’s daughter’s friendship; he then poisoned the president and took over Vola Wave thanks to his will.

Features::

-CMS
-Weapon Upgrade System
-Custom Graphics
-Many More!

That isn't all main characters, its just the ones needed for the first demo, except for Cera (General of Archen Army) and Vantus Valentine (A vampire that I can't put on either, for a couple of reasons )[Keeping with vampires have Valentine as last name tradition ]

So what do you think of it, I'm attaching my Sturm Sheet (Well, minus a few poses, but I have needed ones for demo one on there)
C+C plz

[69_so_fine]

id say it looks pretty interesting i like the story alot and if you need any poses i could do them for you

[EvilShadowX1]

I'm now recruiting a facemaker for my game.
REASON
I'm good at making sprites and battlechars but HORRIBLY RUBBISH at making facesets, if someone could make a faceset with a few expressions for Sturm It would be appreciated.

I need Happy, Sad, Startled (Or whatever the Massive eye pose I did resembles ) and Angry. But any more would be highly appreciated ^_^

[DragonBlaze]

Looks pretty good, however 14 for the main character is rather young.   I don't know what role he'll play, but a 14 year old saving the universe against much older and more experianced people.

Anyway, I think its a good concept and the game sounds pretty cool, just that the characters are a little too young if they're only 14.

[Archem]

Sounds pretty good, if not too similar to some anime movies I've seen recently. But what do I care? I hope it's good!

But what caught my eye is how similar "Archen" is to "Archem". Just a coincidence, huh?

[EvilShadowX1]

lol yeah XD

I know 14 = young but he just joined the army, 14 is the minimum age! But he ain't saving the universe, he is fighting in a a war, though if I make another game as a sequeel, it will probably be a few years on where he WILL be saving the galaxy (I ain't planning for a universal war, how would he do it O_O)

But I'm still looking for a facemaker, so if you can make faces,  please help

Note to 69_so_fine: sure ^_^ You can be pose maker, I can't tell you how much it is an *** making poses when this is my third sprite! ok... I need a pose of him drawing out that PC (that shows HACKED or OPEN) so I can connect it to that, a fold away one would be nice!

[Meiscool-2]

Well, if 14 is when he joins military, then make it like where he's had 2 years of military EXP so that we know why he's so unbeatable in battle and it's not some young warrior cliche.

[69_so_fine]

Originally posted by EvilShadowX1
Note to 69_so_fine: sure ^_^ You can be pose maker, I can't tell you how much it is an *** making poses when this is my third sprite! ok... I need a pose of him drawing out that PC (that shows HACKED or OPEN) so I can connect it to that, a fold away one would be nice!

i dont quite understand what your asking for

[EvilShadowX1]

ok, you know to the right of the non helmetd guy he has a pc, could you make him unfolding it plz?

[Meiscool-2]

Originally posted by EvilShadowX1
ok, you know to the right of the non helmetd guy he has a pc, could you make him unfolding it plz?

Are you familiar with the terms 'copy' and 'paste'?

[DragonBlaze]

Originally posted by Meiscool
Well, if 14 is when he joins military, then make it like where he's had 2 years of military EXP so that we know why he's so unbeatable in battle and it's not some young warrior cliche.

Yeah I think thats a good idea there. I usually prefer it if the character is 18 or older, but I'll be able to live with 16, it's a little more believable. Then again, in Star Wars Episode 1, Anikan was only like 10 and took out a whole spacestation  

[Meiscool-2]

Yes, but Anikan was also a pussy. Just because he could use the force to eat pizza, shave, look through playboy mag, and masturbate at the same time does not make him the best Jedi ever!

[Linkizcool]

I like it! Keep it up!

[69_so_fine]

i was just playing around with it let me know if it works for ya

[EvilShadowX1]

Yes Meiscool, yes I am familier with copy and paste, only i only just started spriting myself so i ain't good enough to do that.

And 69, That Rocks my Socks (It Rocks in otherwords) I can't wait until i need a pose doing again XD

But plz, I reeeeealily need someone to make a face for him, its going to be vital in my game as I am going to include a minigame/mission that is walking and shooting, so I'm using his face as a health counter...