Coloring

[Spike21]

this is my first coloring. i used a cell shadingish type style

[Bluhman]

Well, aside from the OK shading, that person, who is supposed to be you, I presume, looks like a girl.

[Archem]

Gasp! Bluhman! Look out behind you!
Too late.
It's an alright pic, but it feels kinda hollow and underconstructed. Draw a more complete pic, then try to color it in with a few more shades of color.

[Leon_1990]

Originally posted by Bluhman
looks like a girl.

*phew* I thought I was turning gay for a sec...

[Kasumi_Sakura]

Hey now, that's cool.  I like it.

[Grandy]

A FAT girl I might add.

[Spike21]

thanks i will remake HIM less feminin and with better shading... i rushed with the picture because i just waqnted to try out a new shading style thingy...

[Spike21]

srry for double posting but here HE is... i could not make him look any less feminin... it just the person i am modling him after looks like a girl

[DarkFlood2]

1: Make the eyes smaller
2: Put like some clothes
3: make the hair darker

that might help.. I'm not too sure.

[Ruler of the Dark]

Give them a jawline, enough of this really rounded stuff.

[ZeroKirbyX]

For anime propotions, the face itself is fine. Eyes are sposed to be big, jaw is sposed to be pointy, but the rest, ugh. The neck is far too thin and the shoulders go up to sharply. They really shouldn't go up at all. You may also wanna lengthen em, they seem way too short.

[Spike21]

thanx i am still learning

[ZeroKirbyX]

I looked at it again real quick, the nose is a wee bit too high. Maybe lowrr it or make it longer. Did you use PS to color it?

[Spike21]

no all done in flash i do not have photoshop

[shadus]

Look's wimpy.Give him some meat on his bones.