Manga!

[Noobpwner]

I have a team helpin with my manga already but  I need to ask you guys how this sounds for a story..Its based on a real story:
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although later storytellers filled in the gaps with a series of adventures, one of which had Yoshtisune slipping away from the monastary to be trained in the arts of swordsmanship by the mythical tengu.  

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theres the first volumes worth well Yoshitsune is being trained by the tengu then after that he meets his helper who is a huge guy with a realy cool weapon if you want to read  the whole history of him go too:
http://www.samurai-archives.com/yoshitsune.html

[Spike21]

... um more info please

[Noobpwner]

ok well actualy didnt I post the link??? It takes you to his story and if I even try to type up what i know it ewill kill my comp its so much..  So thatas why I put the links

[Spike21]

i know i read it but is the manga exactly the same do you like have any pics.

[Noobpwner]

Not at the moment my team is working on them well im writing up the blank spaces and such.

[Spike21]

...ok

[Noobpwner]

Im not goin 2 completely stick to that though the story im probably gunna change a bit.

[Meiscool-2]

N00bpwner.... seriously.... go to the corner... and....die

[ZeroKirbyX]

I'm not even gonna get involved in this one. Its just as moronic.

[Noobpwner]

lol actualy this one I made because I had pple tellin me too make a manga instead of a anime so when I changed a bunch of artists came to  me and asked if they could help.