My Game [No Title Yet]

[remco]

I can only tell you a small part of the story because other wise I might spoil a little bit to much for the time being.

Story:

Story update

Whyon,
A world like many others.

A World with it's own legends

One of those tells us of four forces,
which symbolize all living things.

These four forces where sealed away by the gods,
into a relic.

The humans got hold of two parts of the relic,
and passed it down from generation to generation.

Amongst the humans story's where told,
of Elf's owning one part of the Relic.

Where the other part remains,
is but a mysterie.

The once so peaceful elves began a war against the human,
trying to get hold of the part’s which the human’s own.

The Humans where afraid of losing the relic,
and sealed away one part into a certain young man.

Many years have passed and the war is still raging,
and so this is where we begin our story.
Beginning:

Your journey begins in a small village called Borun. You get waked up by your aunt. It seems like you overslept your self and need to go hunt to get some boar meat for the geusts at your aunts Inn. In here you'll encounter some monsters and further up ahead you meet your childhood friend from a village up ahead who is also hunting. So you decide to go togheter....

Features:

-Custom made Menu.
-Cut down bushes.
-Jump button.
-Affection of Party members.
-Hidden Items.
-Switch Party Members.
-Main Character can change into an other form (boosting the stats).
-A Timer which keeps track of you playing time.
-Special Weapons can be upgraded.
-Special Weapons will level up with you.
-Forge Items.
-Harvest Moon style Farm.
-Blue Magic system.
-Special Summon system.
-Steal system.
-Some Party members can do Fusion.
-Building your own City with Castle.(And defending it against other).
-Pet battle system (with tournaments and training).
-Alot of mini games.

Here are some Characters:


Name: Gale
Age: 19
Race: Human
Hometown: Borun Village
Weapons: Swords
Description: Gale is a boy who lives with his
aunt who runs an inn. He goes into the forest
much to train his sword skills and to get meat
for the geusts. He always wanted to go on a
big adventure.


Name: Kyle
Age: 18
Race: Elf
Hometown: Kharlan
Weapons: Broad Sword
Description: Kyle lost his parent's at a young
age. He was the responsible for his younger
brother Tobe. Kyle is kind of the lazy type he
doesn't want to do more then needed.


Screenshots:





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Characters and other stuff will be added later on. Hope you guys enjoy and tell me your thoughts.

[Daetyrnis]

The prelude is kind of generic, and reminds me of the typical Zelda plotline.  The starting off hunting a boar (though used in Tales of Phantasia) is a neat idea.

Also, is this perhaps the transformation?:

Good luck!

[DragonBlaze]

The whole good/evil power, evil fighting good, thing and such is all over used and cliche. Something more original there would be nice, but otherwise, looks decent.

[SilverBlade]

Fusion? Transform?!?


Have you ever played Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001? I think you do! The graphics are from that game, so is the main character, so is the transform(nemesis) technique, so is the Fusion, so is the battle system...and so on!!!








...aside that, the features look good but the story is cliché.

[remco]

Also, is this perhaps the transformation?:

Nope it isn't Mine will be different

 

Have you ever played Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001? I think you do! The graphics are from that game, so is the main character, so is the transform(nemesis) technique, so is the Fusion!!!

Well I've played that game for 2 hours and quit I haven't seen the fusion and transform in that game.

And for the graphics those are from Star Ocean a snes Game

[DragonBlaze]

Originally posted by SilverBlade
Fusion? Transform?!?


Have you ever played Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001? I think you do! The graphics are from that game, so is the main character, so is the transform(nemesis) technique, so is the Fusion!!!

Those graphics are NOT from Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001 or whatever. Those graphics are ripped from various snes games. A lot of the graphics in Naufrager came from Star Ocear, probaby a few other games as well. You can't blame him for using graphics from naufrager, otherwise you'd have to blame naufrager just as much for using graphics from star ocean. A LOT of games use the same graphics unless they were customly made, which these were not. And transformations and fusions are in a lot of games as well, and it doesn't mean they were copied from naufrager.

[remco]

Those graphics are NOT from Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001 or whatever. Those graphics are ripped from various snes games. A lot of the graphics in Naufrager came from Star Ocear, probaby a few other games as well. You can't blame him for using graphics from naufrager, otherwise you'd have to blame naufrager just as much for using graphics from star ocean. A LOT of games use the same graphics unless they were customly made, which these were not. And transformations and fusions are in a lot of games as well, and it doesn't mean they were copied from naufrager.

Thanks for that, that was exactly what I meant


Story update

Whyon,
A world like many others.

A World with it's own legends

One of those tells us of four forces,
which symbolize all living things.

These four forces where sealed away by the gods,
into a relic.

The humans got hold of two parts of the relic,
and passed it down from generation to generation.

Amongst the humans story's where told,
of Elf's owning one part of the Relic.

The once so peaceful elves began a war against the human,
trying to get hold of the part’s which the human’s own.

The Humans where afraid of losing the relic,
and sealed away one part into a certain young man.

Many years have passed and the war is still raging,
and so this is where we begin our story.



 Tell me what you think of the new partly changed storyline.

[SilverBlade]

Originally posted by DragonBlaze

Originally posted by SilverBlade
Fusion? Transform?!?


Have you ever played Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001? I think you do! The graphics are from that game, so is the main character, so is the transform(nemesis) technique, so is the Fusion!!!

Those graphics are NOT from Naufrager Crimson: Legacy 001 or whatever. Those graphics are ripped from various snes games. A lot of the graphics in Naufrager came from...

I didn't mean to offend you guys or something :/...And I know that the maker of Naufrager ripped A LOT...but he did it himself...oh, well. Doesn't matter really ^^.

I like the story much more! Good job

[remco]

Well it's much less cliche now

Here are some Characters:


Name: Gale
Age: 19
Race: Human
Hometown: Borun Village
Weapons: Swords
Description: Gale is a boy who lives with his
aunt who runs an inn. He goes into the forest
much to train his sword skills and to get meat
for the geusts. He always wanted to go on a
big adventure.


Name: Kyle
Age: 18
Race: Elf
Hometown: Kharlan
Weapons: Broad Sword
Description: Kyle lost his parent's at a young
age. He was the responsible for his younger
brother Tobe. Kyle is kind of the lazy type he
doesn't want to do more then needed.

[MrMister]

DragonBlaze using the word 'cliché' is cliché.
Good vs Evil has been used for thousands of years because it's a GOOD concept.
Ok? Die in hell.


....


 -teh pwner

[DragonBlaze]

Originally posted by MrMister
DragonBlaze using the word 'cliché' is cliché.
Good vs Evil has been used for thousands of years because it's a GOOD concept.
Ok? Die in hell.


....


 -teh pwner

Cliche is just a word. Its like saying talking in english is overused. Sure, I could have said unoriginal or something instead, but it would have meant the same thing. And while saying that something is cliche may be used a lot, it doesn't change the fact that the thing described is still cliche.

Good vs Evil is a good concept, but not one to base an entire story off of. Why is one force good, and why is one force bad? Everything needs reasons, and once things get reasons and stories behind them, its not really a matter of good vs evil anymore, its one unique side vs another, which is a lot better conflict.

Having the good force vs the bad force is very cliche and used a lot. And if you play a lot of games, seeing the same basic ideas in plots again and again gets very old.

 

I didn't mean to offend you guys or something :/...And I know that the maker of Naufrager ripped A LOT...but he did it himself...oh, well. Doesn't matter really ^^.

I like the story much more! Good job  

Its kinda hard to tell someones expresion from text since it really doesn't show emotion or anything like that. Unless you use smilies a lot   But anyway, it sounded like (to me at least) that you were complaining that he was using graphics and such from another game, which is kinda stupid since the other game used graphics from Star Ocean in the first place. But anywayz, no worries.

[SonicChaos7]

One glaring problem I see is the gfx. If I were you, I'd try not to mix chipsets because it makes people less likely to play your game since people are gfx whores these days.

[FHZebedee]

Not to be a stickler,  but the elf has rounded ears. Is that an intentional feature, or forgetting to touch up something?

[remco]

good you noticed   I uploaded the wrong picture  

Story update

Whyon,
A world like many others.

A World with it's own legends

One of those tells us of four forces,
which symbolize all living things.

These four forces where sealed away by the gods,
into a relic.

The humans got hold of two parts of the relic,
and passed it down from generation to generation.

Amongst the humans story's where told,
of Elf's owning one part of the Relic.

The once so peaceful elves began a war against the human,
trying to get hold of the part’s which the human’s own.

The Humans where afraid of losing the relic,
and sealed away one part into a certain young man.

Many years have passed and the war is still raging,
and so this is where we begin our story.

Check this no more good side and bad side of a force  

[remco]

sorry for the double post but I edited the 2 system files for the text and the battle layout please tell me your thoughts:



think it's better then my last one?