Kingdom Dreams

[KooriRyu]

Hey all this is my first game and all i really have is the story so far so no one get mad or anything.  I'll post the actual words they say and actions later.  It's about Sora from KH and he goes to a psychiatrist after talking to Riku one day and the psych tells him some things.  Then at night he has some flashes and creepy dreams.  you see a world map with blood as water and then in a creepy castle tehre's an evil looking sora and a child sized Riku.  Ok, I won't spoil it and that's all I have for now

[linkline91]

sounds good.  

[robotroy]

The story sounds pretty good... but from what you say so far, it doesn't sound like it has too much to do with KH, except for the 2 characters (which is fine - originality is good!).  If you're not really going to stick with the existing world or story of the original game, then you're probably better off rewriting it so that you use original characters.  Otherwise people will look down on it as just another fan game.  

[KooriRyu]

heres some pics

INTRO DREAM
PARK WALKWAY
PARK MAIN