My new game 4 real Time Spheres

[Wynwalk12]

O.K.

Times Spheres is bades on a comic book created by me...Its about an olg sage who creates seven mystic spheres wich gives you an unique power but if they all come togeter for the wrong use they can be devasting.

You play Meko & Chrono(there brothers) and the rest of the gang. You are just ordenary kids who were drivng down a bridge where a drunk taxi cab driver comes along and knocks you off the bridge,the two of you are seperated and Meko (the youngest) finds a time sphere which gives him powers. But demons are looking for the time spheres too. Tetasis( the main boss) has an army of demons looking for the timespheres. Slash and Kaskay( two of Tetasis minoins) find you and take the time sphere. But luckily your master, Sicemera, comes and saves you. You then learn about the time spheres and there majical powers and now youre on a quest to stop Tetasis.

Theres more to it but I dont want to give it away.

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Bios:


Chrono Michimora
Age: 19
Degree: Marcail Arts
Info: Chrono is a real trouble and likes being the boss and taking things into his own hands. His parents were killed and Sicemera took him and as a son, and a pupil.

Meko Michimora
Age:17
Degree: Marcail Arts
Info: Meko is a kind and gentle person who doesnt like people to get hurt. He spends alot of time training and even more time looking out for Chrono.

Sicemera Mushachi
Age:37
Degree: Marcail Arts
Info: Sicemera is Meko's and Chrono's father and Master. He found them as young children and decided to take them in and teach them the ways of the Marcail Arts.

These are all the basic bios but there are more but I think there are too many...so blah screenies very very very soon!

[Wynwalk12]

This is the Title Screen

[Wynwalk12]

This is when Tetasis is plotting to get the time spheres

[Wynwalk12]

The peaceful town of Meganopolis

[Red Giant]

I'm sorry, but this is really, really cliched.
There are magical object(s) of great power that in the wrong hands cause bad stuff, meaning you have to get em before badguys do. The main character's parents that got killed. The main character is even called Chrono.
Why did this sage make these spheres anyway? And if he has enough power to create them, shouldnt he be easily powerful enough to stop the demons himself?

[Wynwalk12]

This is when they are trying to get to school

[Wynwalk12]

Originally posted by Red Giant
I'm sorry, but this is really, really cliched.
There are magical object(s) of great power that in the wrong hands cause bad stuff, meaning you have to get em before badguys do. The main character's parents that got killed. The main character is even called Chrono.
Why did this sage make these spheres anyway? And if he has enough power to create them, shouldnt he be easily powerful enough to stop the demons himself?

First of all the sage made the time spheres because he was dying and new the great evil was aproaching so he made the time spheres.

And second of all does it really matter if its cliched the point is that it will be the drama and the climax

[Wynwalk12]

OK...this is when they are riding through the woods

[Red Giant]

Originally posted by Wynwalk12
First of all the sage made the time spheres because he was dying and new the great evil was aproaching so he made the time spheres.

And second of all does it really matter if its cliched the point is that it will be the drama and the climax

So, how was he dying exactly? And just telling me it's gonna be dramatic doesnt convince me.

[Wynwalk12]

This is when they are late and Keari is say its your fault in the first place we are late, because he was telling her how they got new swords

[Wynwalk12]

Originally posted by Red Giant
So, how was he dying exactly? And just telling me it's gonna be dramatic doesnt convince me.[/B]

Hes dying because hes an old man...and fat...hehe

And is this dramatic enough for ya?

The teache is being shot by Vandule because he was stealing money from him

[Wynwalk12]

This is chrono's "REACTION" accidentaly put eaction...

[Red Giant]

Originally posted by Wynwalk12
And is this dramatic enough for ya?

The teache is being shot by Vandule because he was stealing money from him

Uhm, well, no, not at all.
1: All of the students seem to be fixated on the board as if nothing is happening, 2: You used the goofy FFL charset for the teacher and 3: You named the pic "NOOO! IM DEAD!" All which decreases the tragic feel of the scene.

[Wynwalk12]

Does it really matter its just a pic...and do you have to be such a big critic...sheesh

[VulcanRaven336]

Looks like a good game with a great storyline. Inform me when you have a playable demo so I can play it for my self.
Great job on chipset jobs.