Dark Fantasy 1:Spell Rejected

[Demni_Black]

I am starting a game project,Dark fantasy.My love of fire emblem rekka no ken,final fantasy tactics advanced,and legend of zelda ocirina of time combined!(I spelled some wrong,I wrote that quickly though!)



In the world of Konoa,many problems and wars were common.But the greatest problem was that of the mage wars.Many eveil mages have attacked major castles,and paladains started getting mad.They posted bountys for any mage.Dead or alive.You are Cura,an orphand girl because a wicked man named Acturus Plaugue of the plague.Your goal is to save the mages and end the war!!!


Any chara heads,charecters,or tiles would help!


I am using Game Maker program for this.If you know where a better system is,tell me!

[wildguy3922]

Umm....a game maker with a cost or without?

If with, use Lightwave or Maya.

[Demni_Black]

Without! gamemaker.nl !Whats light wave?

[VahnGrave]

Well, sounds interesting. I will definately play it if its on RPG maker.

EDIT: Oops... I wish I would have seen that sooner.

[WeaselLord]

It sounds pretty good but I think you may want to make it so you have a few choices.  
You could make it so you can choose to be on the paladin's side and kill the mages, but get revenge on acturas plague (i hope i spelled that close enough)  and tell us how he made you an orphan.  how did he kill your parents?  maybe you could have a beginning movie that shows him kill them.
and how old were you when you were orphaned?
if you were yound enough, someone would have to take you in.
if so, who took you in?

I dont mean any offense by all this and if you dont like these ideas, you dont have to listen to them.

overall rating from me:
7.5 of 10
tell us some more about the story and it can grow!

[MrMister]

Wait, if you're using Game Maker why are you using those crappy RPG Maker charasets?