This one for sure guys!

[X_marks_the_ed]

I'm with Darkfox on the cloak beast thing. You might want a better one. Not enough detail.

[grand_PiNpOn]

jep...its a nice game...cool story....but...its not that i don't like the screens but...they seem so empty...give it a little more trees and houses and shrubs and stuff:P
furter more...that monsters really gotta go....i know da guy who did it(can't remember his name) has put alot of effort in it...but is ya want a look a like that cloak beast....search mre sites....cuz this one doesn't really fit to the graphics you use.
further more..............naw thats it:P
keep working on your skills....they will get better every time you work on your game....just check out the maps you make now...and compare them with the maps ya will make in about 2 months....they will get better....atleast for me it did:P
well.....keep on workin bro
i'll keep lookin out for your game and more screens

Peace

[Fortet]

Yay! Critisism! I love it! It helps a lot!!! Anyways, I'm an idiot and have been playing Ragnarok and not working on the game... *slaps forehead* Stupid stupid stupid!!! Anyways, getting back on track!

[MSlash67]

Originally posted by Darkfox
The cloak beast graphicx was completely drawn quickly on MSPaint with hardly any shadeing or textureing. Needs to be redone to better fit the graphics.

Eh hem, I did draw it, but not on MS Paint. I hand drew it, scanned, colored it in Paint Shop pro, then put in the detail...Looked great. when I resized it..it ended up with what is in this thread.

[grand_PiNpOn]

i can draw a cloakbeast for ya if ya want....but in can't color it and i can't shrink it to size....i guess somebody else can do that...the coloring and the shrinking to the actual size.....
i will draw the cloak monster....for it is my duty to help those in need.....and YOU are a little boi in trouble.....kinda:p
well...i'll post the cloakbeast when i'm done drawing it:p

[Leon_1990]

kl change Leon's age 2 14 and his hair colour 2 grey-ish
and I'm your main character

[grand_PiNpOn]

well....drawn this is a few minutes
and it turned out like a Cape-beast:p
srry bout that....but tell me if ya like it...i can ink the lines to make it look more "alive"
and then someone maybe can color and make it to size for ya

P.S.
it's a very big picture.....sorry bout that:p

[Fortet]

I might have a small delay in the demo release, but the demo should be out before April 20th! Please bear with me on this!!!

[Fortet]

I have decided to make this a four part saga because I can fit sooooo much of stuff into one part to make a whole game. So, I'll do that. Anyways, the demo will still be out April 20th! Look forward to it!

EDIT:
Here are the Game's Names:
手品師との戦い (A Fight with a Mage)
剣士の復讐 (A Swordsman's Revenge)
短剣の憤り (The Dagger's Wrath)
暗い主の上昇 (The Dark Lord's Rise)