Halo Comix

[A Forgotten Legend]

....maybe making it a PNG would help its suckiness.  JPG suck ***.

[Moosetroop11]

I've gotta say, I wasn't sure whether the first one was kinda funny in that it's supposed to be bad, or it was just bad. So I waited for another episode. Aand... that episode wasn't too great.

It's not the art that's the problem; it's that the joke is painfully obvious to the point of being spelt out by the characters: that's why I thought that in the first one it was exaggerating the joke for funny purposes. But... yeah.

Anyway, constructive critisism time!

A good way of showing the bullet firing would be a BANG in red letters between the speech bubbles or something. I know some artists try to leave sound effects out of the comic because they're too cartoony, but I can't think of any better way of showing he'd been shot in that instance. Plus, the pee's pretty cartoony so it would've fit in fine.

Also, I doubt 23 year old would accidentally put in the wrong year, man >.> But I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

[rm2k3_rulez]

On the 23 year old part, the 9 is right next to the 8. I probably pressed it by accident without looking because I start to get in a hurry.

[rm2k3_rulez]

No its not stolen. Look at the crappiness of it. Does it look stolen? If it does then I didnt take it. I swear on this account.

[ZeroKirbyX]

Not funny.

[rm2k3_rulez]

Whats not funny? I swear I didnt take it! I promise guys. Please believe me this time please!

[lilsniffs3]

He means your comic is not funy. PM me and we'll (Yes, we'll) write some lines together.