Musica that i made :)

[mrhawi]

 Hi guys, i'm here again, i want u to see my first composition, is a midi, i need counsels and critics please =), regards.

[Red Giant]

Hmm. I like it. A little iffy near the beggining in my opinion, but for a first attempt it is splendid. Nice structure. It really picks up when it gets faster, but it feels like it ends before it's totally run it's course. Do keep at it.