Silent Destiny

[Serano65]

I can finally post  one screen shot from my game so far.

[linkline91]

Wow. I wish i could make and build up a story like dat.

[Arcanagirl]

Welcome to Critics from Jenna, I'm your host...Jenna...Now then I only critic, never praise..That is our later show at 6:30pm called "Praise me Please"...Let's start with todays guest...Aww Serano65, how are you...Oh you have game ideas...humm lets see...Oup...we have a Caller..."Weregnome": His name Rock sounds fairly stupid!

I would have to agree on this one, sorry Serano65, but the name Rock...Too plain I tell ya...Needs some lift to it, little more spice.

*Rule breaker*: Nice battle scene there...I like it...

Humm seems like an interesting story...and you made a goof, you should never tell you game players any secrets about your game...ok so the half breed issue...It is kewl and all, but now it wont be a suprise, now everyone will be looking for him to reveal it to the party...

*Rule of Game making*: Never spoil a game that hasnt been made yet...or played yet...Swoosh...

*dunn dun dunn*: Now are they cats in battle..or human in battle? Please be sure to clearify sous idiots like me understand..lol...So half man half cat in battle?

-Is that like bloody roar..human until they fight and turn into beasts? I love that game...

Ok I am done with my critic..hope not harsh...I am a pro game critic, a perfectionist..I state my opinion yes true...but only on ideas...for real games like ff series...I critc graphical errors, improper grammer..stuff like that..xenogears made fei's chara talk, but had this name as maria...*tisk tisk*Secret of Mana 2 dont fall into holes and use escape rope or you have to start over...

*You want help I will help you to get your ideas into a storyline...I love story writing...Just contact me in pm..I be glad to help and even give you some ideas and scripting advise.*

[Serano65]

thanks for the info, and I don't want praise but it was funny. i just need to know what I am doing wrong so I will have to change a few things around thanks to my giving away of the plot behind my guy. thier is still much more to learn about the young fighter and the half breed thing come in fairly quickly but thats more him talking to you the player. when I get more done you'll see what I mean. thanks Arcanagirl your a lifesaver.

[Arcanagirl]

Well...I cant just let you throw spoilers everywhere now can I...If you asked anyone what my game was about..they be...girl named lilly guy names camui..blah blah...I gave no character insight or anytype of plot what so ever...rofl keeps them guessing...Ok say you post another reply listing your games charas...Try this on, list their names, ages, attributes if any, favorite stuff/weapons/clothes/colors, list a brief, very brief persona...what kind of person they are..rude, kind, friendly, agressive, idiot..lol, simple, make listing ideas simple, simple means less knowledge is gained, it gives people an idea, just an idea...That makes them want to play even more then ever...A game I bought while back, the reviews on it before it was released was short...showed 1 or 2 screenshots, showed 4 charas with a small info thingy, then talked a bit about the release date and how it was rated....and I was like gimmi gimmi gimmi..then I played it and everything as like...wha?! no way!? holy %^&*!!!They never mentioned this...

This makes the game a huge wow...People will have lots more fun...atleast for me anyhow...I like to keep my people guessing!!!  

[Weregnome]

lol. the wise words of Arcana.  

[Serano65]

I think I am almost done with the demo I just have to work a little on mosters"but thats never been my strong point. I just put a few small things in like about seven places you will go in the game and I am working on a few bosses. I have many things left to work on but helping other a bit has helped me a lot. if you have any tips seeing this is my first game and all plz let me know.