Ralra

[Revolution911]

And a poem I wrote for a poetry contest:

I wonder why children starve, yet still have the heart to pray
I wonder why we love people more when they're gone or passed away
It confuses me, it makes me think, when a kid holds a gun to be cool
I guess nobody told him about that one Columbine school
When I was young, I was told what I was going to have to be
I wonder why I cant choose, I wonder why I cant just be me
I wonder why the crow crow's more often now-a-days
I wonder why I realize this now, dont tell me its a ****ing "phase"
To think, for years, I followed these rules, without questioning why
To think there's a "higher plan" for me, I refuse to just abide
I wonder why people even have to ask why the caged bird sings
I wonder why I'm the only one who thinks about these things
Im starting to question why it took over 100 years to see
What 1 man saw since he was born, when he said "I have a dream"
Why do we take out guns to promote non-violent ways
Why am I looking foward to death, why am I counting the days
Why does nobody look past a culture's cover, a culture's face
It's deeper than it seems, look for the underdogs, give them praise
I wonder why it took a culture to help me speak out, gave me luck
Even took on my outlook on life for me, Common summed it up
"Never looking back, or too far infront of me
The present is a gift, and I just wanna be"

[Andrew78]

nice.

[Dragonium]

It's very good. I like it.

Nice drawing too.

[GhostClown]

Nice. The man's hair in the drawing seem's a tad too big though.

[blaze_shinigami]

i say the forehead's too small, which makes the hair look big

[Revolution911]

....HAX



In all seriousness...ty for any criticisms