A few sprites

[Zerlina]

Well, my game is a story divided into three books. Here are the main characters from the first book. I've finished almost all poses (except for diagonals), and am just proud to show off the work ^^. Please tell me what you think.

[I Have a Sandwich]

Are the two guys hair meant to be eerily similar?

[EXO Muffin]

Thust quoteth by the sandwich.

On thy infectionate marrow(I don't know why I said that), the left guy looks more feminine, laid-back, yet swift and deadly, whilst thy eastern guy perceiveth more foolish, eager, and masculine. It's like their fraternal twins...but the left guy doesn't look evil enough. The girl looks like the naggy, persistent, impatient types that can sometimes be very sweet and lemon-scented. If I were to reflect upon thoust preset incoumpbrences of personality(what the?) very different it likely, the most sucheth and be.


The sprites look a little too templated, as the shape and texture of all of their faces are equal. You should throw in a demonic eye or scar or glasses or hat or mask or something. They overally look most cucumbery in pickle cuking but crisp and fresh they yet be. Pondereth bey thy this yonder and understandability will raise itself towards thou.

SO SAYETH THE N00B.

[Zerlina]

Originally posted by EXO Muffin
Thust quoteth by the sandwich.

On thy infectionate marrow(I don't know why I said that), the left guy looks more feminine, laid-back, yet swift and deadly, whilst thy eastern guy perceiveth more foolish, eager, and masculine. It's like their fraternal twins...but the left guy doesn't look evil enough. The girl looks like the naggy, persistent, impatient types that can sometimes be very sweet and lemon-scented. If I were to reflect upon thoust preset incoumpbrences of personality(what the?) very different it likely, the most sucheth and be.


The sprites look a little too templated, as the shape and texture of all of their faces are equal. You should throw in a demonic eye or scar or glasses or hat or mask or something. They overally look most cucumbery in pickle cuking but crisp and fresh they yet be. Pondereth bey thy this yonder and understandability will raise itself towards thou.

SO SAYETH THE N00B.

Why did I understand that?


lol...

The two are supposed to be similar, and the guy on the left isn't exactly "evil," he's just a little confused. Basically, it's the story of two heroes who could actually be the same person (ie: they're somewhat similar and posess similar qualities), but because something happens by chance, they end up becoming separated and follow two different roads. The guy on the left eventually becomes the "villain" while the guy on the right stays the protagonist.
So it's basically like...how evil and good aren't set in stone. Anyone can become "evil" and anyone can become "good" depending on how life works out for them.

Anyways yeah ^^


BTW, you got the character personalities down perfect. Good guessing ^^ Er...except that the girl isn't that naggy lol.

I'm not sure how I can change the face, though. I used different eye colours, and changed the darkness of the skin depending on the characters' histories and how far south their homeland is. I think I can add a scar to the guy on the left, because his faceset has one. But I'm not sure what else I could add to the others.