Need help completing two battle charsets. Will give credit!

[The Last Draconian]

I have been trying very hard to complete these two (2-part) battle charsets (the attached images) on my own, but they just don't look right.  I'm terrible at pixel art, and it's a miracle that I've even gotten this far.  All I need is proper shading (which I'm really terrible at), the female set to be readjusted to look right (I can't put my finger on it, but it just looks a little off), and for the male status pose to look right (I did a terrible job on that one).  If someone could do that for me, it'd make me really happy.  The format is for RTP for 2003.

Thank you.