Legend of the Shadow Knight

[Sephiroth12317]

Hi everyone this is a brand new game! Yay!!!! But I dont have a RPG maker! Boo-hoo! So please post away!

And thats my main char!

[Linkforce]

so how can you make a game then?

[lan-the phoenix holder]

ok well i could help with what u need

[Sephiroth12317]

Here is some info on my game. One day my char (I dont have a name for him) walks outside his house and sees his village on fire and many ninjas retreating from his village. When he's older he travels around the world looking for the boss who is a ninja (duh! lol). Here is a picture of him!

[lan-the phoenix holder]

interseting

[Sephiroth12317]

I now have the RPG maker! Send me your downloads!

[Rune_of_Punishment]

I really think you start the game off differently. People usually turn their heads when they see the beginning have the main character's village burn.

[Bart_Fatima]

ugh...YOu need to have sort of more of a storyline and since you don't know what your doing(Im guessing) no offence, people might excuse you. another thing you can't tell people to post away this is to discuss your game/ show what you have done. oh and alot of people don't play games because they are RTP which is the graphics that come with rpg maker. But if you need help with anything people here will help you

[lan-the phoenix holder]

i agree with Bart but i don't agree with the rune_of_punishment

[Rune_of_Punishment]

It's my opinion. Don't start this again, lan.

The story is too basic and most likely won't get many people to play it. You need to have plot twists, hooks, anything that can be used to help make this game appealing. While many don't like RTP graphics, I think some would play a game with RTP if it is used correctly.

As a side note, if you disagree with me or think I'm an a-hole, go right ahead and think that way. I'm just trying to help improve, not just criticize because I want to.

[blackskullwarlock]

I agree with Rune on this. The village that burns introduction is included in so many games....

Then again, this ain't my game so the final choice is his.

[Secret Box]

I'm gonna have to also agree

[Solid]

Well honeslty I havent seen a RPG maker game with a burning village at the very start. I only saw it in Fable and BOF... So maybe he still has a chance, dont you think? all depending how it happens and what happens when he comes out the house and sees the houses burning.

Then after that he still has a chance if he adds stuff in further of the game, but only if he places it after the intro.

Maybe not start off going to a cave or a forest or a castle. But what if he went for a walk and fell down a hole and had to get out of it? But stuff in there gets wierd and he sorta unleshes the mystical monsters to the real world from that demension.
Uh... ya

I really dont think my game makes more sence than this. Im just going with it I got pissed with the older story I spent days writing that totally didnt go with the aspect of the name.

And jsut so you know. You cant jsut download rpgmaker and make a game. Its been a year ive been playing with it and all my games. wait what games? I wasnt able to make any ecause my lack of expiriance with rm2k. I still have to start using virables and stuff liek that. If you dont use virables and such ure doombed.

But if you just want to make a game for your own pleasure, GO FOR IT AND GOOD LUCK!!!

[Secret Box]

I never thought of that!

[Sephiroth12317]

Alright I'll think of something new soon and post it.