House of Broken Glass

[Empty Minion]

Hey this is a new concept game i've decided to take on, i plan on upping up the character's and map graphics once the main game is done, so bare with regular rtp gfx for now please.
Playable characters:
Todd-
         Age:6
         Specialties:His own imagination
Concept: A game filled with mutliple puzzles, a custom battle system, many mini games... taking place during a fantasy world created by Todd's own imagination. You wake up at a carn-evil, and journey throught many different fantasies as the story truly unfolds on why Todd imagines these things...
----Not much done yet, here is a screenshot though.

[artoni]

Unique idea. I look forward to playing it, and exploring the scarred psyche....hee.

[kodakumi]

ive got the perfect midi if your going to have like a hub or something.

[Empty Minion]

Wow thanks, i like it gotta find a good area to put that in though lol.-- anyway i got another screen for you all to take a gander at. Just a little combination puzzle.

[kodakumi]

i liked the first screen better but the game looks like it has an original plot.... i wanna play it when the demo or full version come out.

[Empty Minion]

Yah the first screen was much better, i havnet decided on a chip set for that one yet, so im using a basic rtp dungeon. O well ill fix it up. Anyway.. here is the start of the tile screen i was playin around with. (it looks empty, please give comments)

[GhostClown]

So far.. The screens look un-attractive and plane.. Work on them a little.

[kodakumi]

wish i could make titles that look like that.
i use paint heh heh heh...

[Empty Minion]

I might adda  transparent ball of glass hitting the ground and shattering in the background, whadya all think?

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

tht'd be sumting uniqeu ^^

[kodakumi]

so... whats the plot.

something about the boys imagination.... turning into a gothic adventure.

am i right.... or wrong.

[kodakumi]

can anyone here go to my forum and read the plot to the story part of my game..... and constructively critisise it.



http://charas-project.net/forum/showthread.php?threadid=10270&forumid=11&catid=4

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

uhm...well uhm....its confusing, when i read it real fast it makes me go :  

but uhm...a litle cliched, like ''this clan wants to destroy it all''.
but further, hmmm, its good but a litle cliched. improve some cliches.
ofcourse, ALL cliches cant be removed, but at least try

and what i dont understand, why did you make a second thread?
because that one didn't have good coments? hmmm...

[Empty Minion]

main idea is the phsyche struggle of a boy deprived of a childhood, and how his imagination takes a turn for the worst due to a certain event..

[AsakuraHao2004]

Haha! Satanic children!