Codename: Mindless

[Muramasa]

My game I started working on, "Mindless": the codename.

What's in the demo is more like the beginning of a skeleton for the project. It's pretty short and I only had it as a demo so my friends could see what I have so far, but I came here and this section spoke to me. Anyway, if you play it, tell me what you think of it. From what's in it, you can't really grasp what the plot is, but it will soon unfold...

www.geocities.com/magnasparks/Mindless

Comments are appreciated.

Also, if you have any suggestions to make the intro "jump out at you" or at least be more interesting, please post your suggestion. I felt the intro wasn't that exciting, even though, it's my project and my first creation. (I try to be my hardest critic)

[Linkforce]

for your first creation, it wasnt too bad.  it was interesting... just, you need more no rtp things.  like music and stuff.  i like the concept of the kid has a normal life.  it has potential, so stick with it.  

[Muramasa]

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. But sorry, 'rtp'? Seen it, but don't know exactly what it is...

[Linkforce]

RTP are the graphics that are originally there in RM2k or RM2k3

[Muramasa]

Thanks, so you're saying to use more custom and no rtp people? Cause I was only using them for random townspeople and such.
Or was that 'no' in "more no rtp things" a typo? I'm not sure...

[Linkforce]

you can use some, just not all.  lol... try making something on the generator or something... same thing for the music... try and get more non-rtp music... looks good so far though

[kodakumi]

theres a program that you can download to make your own charsets called charas.EX which i downloaded from gamingw.net

that might help a little.

[Grandy]

 You know what? This site made Charas.EX

[Dragonium]

Uuuh... *Faints*

By the way, looks okay to me.