war between life and death

[Syntax]

I just droped out in january. I might go back in september.

[karl3]

he is only 14

[samus the fighter]

i have changed the storyline u should read the first thread more man..... besides i have done the mistake errors (spelling etc) i was doing this game at 1 o cloak man so i was sleepy



hi people i have upgraded my stroyline etc this is how it goes...


in a town called lomain the village of humans (if ur wondering why the village of humans its because monsters have ruled the world)
and one day the nasty queen Lakos and Sir Danga plan to make another war!!! world war 3 but against monsters! so they kidnap a child called Samuel he was only 8 when this happened so he was scared and sir Danga burnt his village to the ground nothing left! then 10 years later samuel lives with his adopted family no one knows wat happened to lakos or danga but rumours are saying they live in the world of demons so samuel and his best friend jamie are on a quest to know the truth of wat happened that day! the only thing they can do is kill the monster army


perpare to fight massive monsters!!!!
go into diffrent worlds!!! !!!!
see amazing stroylines!!!
o yes and save the world!!!!!!!!!!


they kidnapp samuel a pure hearted boy Lakos needs a pure hearted boy to start the war between life and death!

save friends and meet new friends!!!!
and get summons!!!! and hear this!!!
transforms!!!!!!!!






samuel

age 18

sex male

race human (the last of his kind)





jamie

age 18

sex male

race elf (the dark elfs son)







and more on the way .......... let the war begin only one will win!!!

[Rune_of_Punishment]

Why doesn't your story fit, Karl? You said he hasn't been in school for 2 years, then later you say he hasn't been in school for 3. Which is it? And don't bring age into this. I was good with grammar when I was 10.

[samus the fighter]

listen i aint been to school because i had some personal probelms so i left no big deal.... i still learn besides this has nothing to do with school etc so lets just get on with rpg making read this!!!



hi people i have upgraded my stroyline etc this is how it goes...


in a town called lomain the village of humans (if ur wondering why the village of humans its because monsters have ruled the world)
and one day the nasty queen Lakos and Sir Danga plan to make another war!!! world war 3 but against monsters! so they kidnap a child called Samuel he was only 8 when this happened so he was scared and sir Danga burnt his village to the ground nothing left! then 10 years later samuel lives with his adopted family no one knows wat happened to lakos or danga but rumours are saying they live in the world of demons so samuel and his best friend jamie are on a quest to know the truth of wat happened that day! the only thing they can do is kill the monster army


perpare to fight massive monsters!!!!
go into diffrent worlds!!! !!!!
see amazing stroylines!!!
o yes and save the world!!!!!!!!!!


they kidnapp samuel a pure hearted boy Lakos needs a pure hearted boy to start the war between life and death!

save friends and meet new friends!!!!
and get summons!!!! and hear this!!!
transforms!!!!!!!!






samuel

age 18

sex male

race human (the last of his kind)

he has always been a shy boy intil now!
his main quest in life is to have a family and stop the war!
soliders are coming but wait... these arent human!!!
they are monsters!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so Samuels job is to protect his adopted family
from war



jamie

age 18

sex male

race elf (the dark elfs son)

not alot is known about this person except he uses a battle axe
called the death bringer his farther is the dark elf king but jamie never wanted to become a prince he wanted to save his best friend Samuel jamie has the power to transform into a dark elf like his farther


 yalo

age 24

sex female

race elf

this women has the power to summon monsters
she is one of the royal armys wepaon to destroy the village but samuel meets this women and they get atracted to each other and become very good friends but this wont stop lakos plan or will it?


dal

age 6

sex male

race dawf

this boy is very good at throwing axes at monsters so we should see alot of good fighting with this chara Jamies cousin dawf dal.




lakos

age unkown

 sex female

race deathless elf queen

playerable chara no

this is the probelm of the war the queen of deathless castle wants to start a war between life and her death army
Samuel is the only one who can stop this maddness or can he?




sir Danga

age unknown

sex male

race human

playerable chara no

this is lakos bodyguard the master behind the burning village the killer of Samuels family Danga is a human the only one to join lakos he has the power to control weather and dead people

this is just the begining of pain!!! perpare for the war between life and death!

whoever wins rules the world........


 comin soon a release date

[samus the fighter]

battle fight!

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

thats pretty cool

[Syntax]

At least he has a large amount of potential...

[Leon_1990]

^^ THE BEST CHARS IN THE WORLD!!! lol

Glad to see how your gettin on Samus , the storylines gettin better, and now I know why they kidnapped samuel

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

whats wrong with you? ^o)

lol sorry, but you where shouting, dont shout! god, whe understand if you say it normal too, ooooh im acting moddy XD

[samus the fighter]

in a town called lomain the village of humans (if ur wondering why the village of humans its because monsters have ruled the world)
and one day the nasty queen Lakos and Sir Danga plan to make another war!!! world war 3 but against monsters! so they kidnap a child called Samuel he was only 8 when this happened so he was scared and sir Danga burnt his village to the ground nothing left! then 10 years later samuel lives with his adopted family no one knows wat happened to lakos or danga but rumours are saying they live in the world of demons so samuel and his best friend jamie are on a quest to know the truth of wat happened that day! the only thing they can do is kill the monster army


perpare to fight massive monsters!!!!
go into diffrent worlds!!! !!!!
see amazing stroylines!!!
o yes and save the world!!!!!!!!!!


they kidnapp samuel a pure hearted boy Lakos needs a pure hearted boy to start the war between life and death!

save friends and meet new friends!!!!
and get summons!!!! and hear this!!!
transforms!!!!!!!!






samuel

age 18

sex male

race human (the last of his kind)

he has always been a shy boy intil now!
his main quest in life is to have a family and stop the war!
soliders are coming but wait... these arent human!!!
they are monsters!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so Samuels job is to protect his adopted family
from war



jamie

age 18

sex male

race elf (the dark elfs son)

not alot is known about this person except he uses a battle axe
called the death bringer his farther is the dark elf king but jamie never wanted to become a prince he wanted to save his best friend Samuel jamie has the power to transform into a dark elf like his farther


yalo

age 24

sex female

race elf

this women has the power to summon monsters
she is one of the royal armys wepaon to destroy the village but samuel meets this women and they get atracted to each other and become very good friends but this wont stop lakos plan or will it?


dal

age 6

sex male

race dawf

this boy is very good at throwing axes at monsters so we should see alot of good fighting with this chara Jamies cousin dawf dal.




lakos

age unkown

sex female

race deathless elf queen

playerable chara no

this is the probelm of the war the queen of deathless castle wants to start a war between life and her death army
Samuel is the only one who can stop this maddness or can he?




sir Danga

age unknown

sex male

race human

playerable chara no

this is lakos bodyguard the master behind the burning village the killer of Samuels family Danga is a human the only one to join lakos he has the power to control weather and dead people

this is just the begining of pain!!! perpare for the war between life and death!

whoever wins rules the world........


comin soon a release date

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

i smell improvement here , lol, but just dont post the story over and over, it gets annoying, just post the updates and all;)

[Leon_1990]

-_-'' MMB, ur turnin in2 a mod lol
Stop it! lol

[mind-master: brain(mmb)]

i would relaxe if i where you leon1990.

woops that whas moddy again XD XD XD

anyway ill stop

[PeRKLE]

Originally posted by karl3
he is only 14

What has this to do with anything?