Babylon

[Bart_Fatima]

This is an old story I was working on...lost and rebuilt so here you guys go

Every 3000 years previously until the present, Abel was housed inside of a single vessel and Cain would continue to kill him every 3000. During the time of the Holy descension, when Elaym(L-a-ham) and Madaym(Ma-day-ham) bore the children Cain and Abel, Cain slew Abel and was cursed to forever live in purgatory. But 1000 years later, the group of people called Ethernians, released Cain from purgatory and Abel was housed in a vessel who's name is unknown. Cain killed the vessel and cursed Abel to return every 3000 years in a new vessel so Cain can continue to kill him. But when Seth came down, he decided to stop this cycle and in the year 9999which he seal Cain away in the boy of Abels new vessel.But when the Ethernians discovered this they went to Ephraim and found a women and a young boy named ABEL, which they killed the mother and kidnapped Abel who was taken to the Goliath and was a test subject until the Ethernians brought out Cain from inside of the boy's body.



Characters:

Abel:When He was young his mother was killed by the Etherniak Space Force because they were trying to use him as a test subject after they learned of his powers. Abel was taken by the ethernians to the EFSF base in the Sky called the Goliath where they did experiments on him. After countless experiments, Abel released Caine who then plotted on getting rid of the 'coward' named Abel.

Caine: The Cain born from Elaym(L-a-ham) and Madaym(Ma-day-ham), killed his brother and pretended he did not commit this crime. He was punished to Purgatory where he was later discovered when a group of people called Ethernians released him and he cursed Abel to return every 3000 years so Cain could kill him each time. When Seth was born, he decided to stop this, Sealing Cain inside of the last vessel of Abel...but in the year 9999 he was released after Abel was experimented on. He is worshiped by the Ethernians.

here is Abel
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/3460/fei5nf.png

here is Cain
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/2306/caine7eh.png

[Leon_1990]

Ephraim and seth?!
you've been playing FE: the sacred stones , havent you

[Bart_Fatima]

no I got Ephraim from the bible and Seth is Adam and eve's third Son

EDIT: who do you think these two are? Elaym(L-a-ham) and Madaym(Ma-day-ham)...Eve and Adam

ready Madaym's name back words

[Bart_Fatima]

So does anyone has any comments or thoughts about my game's storyline?

[dragon11137]

sounds cool i realy like the storry line i think ill keep looking at this 1