Carpe Diem: The Living Flame

[Nandez]

Originally posted by Kass
I wished Nadez would use more periods. I'll play the game when the oppurtunity presents itself.

You missed a letter in my name. Heh actually my spelling and punctuation isn't nearly that bad most of the time, however it was early, I was tired, and forgot to proof read. So meh.

[InsaneJP]

Ill be playin in a lil bit ill be sure to tell you what i think!

[Meiscool-2]

Originally posted by Nandez

quote:

Originally posted by Kass I wished Nadez would use more periods. I'll play the game when the oppurtunity presents itself.

You missed a letter in my name. Heh actually my spelling and punctuation isn't nearly that bad most of the time, however it was early, I was tired, and forgot to proof read. So meh.

So long as you're not as bad as Jek or Janis, we won't mind :p

[I Have a Sandwich]

Originally posted by Meiscool

quote:

Originally posted by Nandez quote: Originally posted by Kass I wished Nadez would use more periods. I'll play the game when the oppurtunity presents itself. You missed a letter in my name. Heh actually my spelling and punctuation isn't nearly that bad most of the time, however it was early, I was tired, and forgot to proof read. So meh.

Janis, we won't mind :p

Janis?

[Linkforce]

Okay guys, getting off topic.....


Anyways, thanks Drag for that review.  I appreciate it that you took the time to write it and am glad that you liked it so much.  ^^

Anybody else play it yet and have any comments, etc?

[Nandez]

Originally posted by Linkforce
Okay guys, getting off topic.....


Anyways, thanks Drag for that review.  I appreciate it that you took the time to write it and am glad that you liked it so much.  ^^

Anybody else play it yet and have any comments, etc?

Ok time for a few mistakes made in the game. Sometimes when the bards play theres no music if there isn't supposed to be nevermind. I encounter spelling errors quite a bit no big ones just missing letters and such, I would chalk it up to the keys not being hit hard enough but its the same words everytime but no big deal. You can also walk on the mayors wife after you do the chimney quest and I couldn't leave town until I reset the game after everything had been completed for some strange reason. Trance is also not in your party at all or at least not shown from there to the boat. The Sea Background I think should be removed because when your charcater starts moving and you get close to the boat it looks more like well everything is floating and since its the sea it shouldn't . I found a few errors while your Alkamar, he can walk on tables and the guards are floating above him. When you walk into the kitchen your screwed right away Because you put boxes in the doorway so when you enter Alkamar gets stuck and you have to reset a ways back if you didn't save even if you did you have to go through his and kings cutscene again. While Alkamar is walking and your not controlling him he'll go to a door or staircase and spend about 7 seconds before it switches to the next place which is to long I thought the game froze 3 times but it didn't. Ok thats all I have to report so far.

[aboutasoandthis]

There are a few things I'm concerned about, but they're not important.

I'm glad you fixed some of the dialogue, but you should really use analysis instead of analyzation in the intro. Also, the DBS wasn't that great for me. It needed more..."options." All you could do was use a healing item when you had one, attack, or use some non-important special attack. It seemed all I had to do was Attack Attack Attack as fast as I can. Where was the strategy?

I won't bother making a review since Dragonium already made an excellent one. Even if it is a little overhyping.  :p

What was the exact time-phrame of your game? It went from Futuristic, to Industrial Revolution, to Medieval.

[Linkforce]

Now that that's out of the way....(Thanks to whoever deleted those posts)

*Ahem*

Nandez: What Bard are you talking about?

And thanks for the list.  I fixed the mistakes.  Thanks.  ^^'
Oh, and Trance is not in the party, because he hasn't  technically joined your party.


Aboutaso: I fixed up some of those things.  Oh, and the battles are pretty straight forward, because you have to remember that it's only the beggining of the game.  Down the road, it will get more complex.  Promise.

Oh, and about the time-phrame, its basically the reamains of a once highly advanced civilization, which is now in the process of regaining its technology.  That's why there are labs and such.  Need further explaining?

[aboutasoandthis]

That pretty much covered it.  

Oh and be careful if you're trying to make this a long game by just adding an episode once in a while. It might end up like "The Way." It could get boring if you don't finish the story and don't aim to end the game.

Also, you might wanna elaborate a little more on this military thing Haru joined. Maybe a text box or two with a moving map showing exactly what they do. I want to see why he's off duty, and what that's all about.

Other than that, keep working at it.

[Meiscool-2]

Sorry Eric, but I don't think I'll be able to play your game till X-mas time. With school, I barly even have enough time to work on my own game, so yeah... I'm sure you get the picture.

[InsaneJP]

hey man the game is great so far... i dies on that guy with the wierd battle stance when i was alkamar cuz when i was inflicted with that statuts.... the only thing i didnt kinda like but didnt mind it really was the over use of final fantasy sounds and music but you know what there all great sounds and songs anyway i just want you to make sure you dont over use them too much!

[Nandez]

Like the Girl with the harp in the first town your in she starts playing but no music starts. The bards on the boat also no music comes out.

Originally posted by Linkforce
Now that that's out of the way....(Thanks to whoever deleted those posts)

*Ahem*

Nandez: What Bard are you talking about?

And thanks for the list.  I fixed the mistakes.  Thanks.  ^^'
Oh, and Trance is not in the party, because he hasn't  technically joined your party.


Aboutaso: I fixed up some of those things.  Oh, and the battles are pretty straight forward, because you have to remember that it's only the beggining of the game.  Down the road, it will get more complex.  Promise.

Oh, and about the time-phrame, its basically the reamains of a once highly advanced civilization, which is now in the process of regaining its technology.  That's why there are labs and such.  Need further explaining?

[Linkforce]

Aboutaso: I'm not sure where you're going with this, but the Episodes have already been pre-determined.  I will have 3 episodes.  It's not like I'm making this up as I go.  Each episode will be another game.  

Oh, and about Haru and what-not.  You're the frirst to bring that up.  But rest assured, that will all be xplained.  what's the point in rushing into things, eh?


Meis: Meh

Insane: Thanks.  ^^  Oh, and if I find other SFX I'll be sure to use 'em.

Nandez: I'll fix that harp girl.

And The two guys on the boat DO play.  The music in the backround, and for the rest of that scene is them playing.  Thought it would be understood in the game though..........

[Linkforce]

I'd like a few more reviews and what not, but I guess not many people have played it maybe.  

Anyways, just letting you guys know that I'm not dead.  Lol.

I've began game production once again, and I'm starting to map and event for Chapter 3.  Never thought I'd be talking about CHapter 3.  Hehe.....been stuck on Chapter 2 for way too damn long.

Anywyas, I'd appreciate it if someone could help me out with the maps.  I need someone good at forrests.  

Er...nothing else really.  I'm gonna work hard at it to get this game rolling fast.  I'll need as much support as possible, so don't be shy.  :p

And I haven't shown a screen in a while, so here's one from Chapter 3.

Enjoy.

[Meiscool-2]

That screen shot is really plain.

Odds are the reason not so many have played it is school.