Wardge Tail

[Muramasa]

Hi everyone. As you can probably see, I am Muramasa. I have been hard at work bringing one of my latest ideas to life. It isn't meant to be some epic, like a Final Fantasy, but a light-hearted RPG based off one of my comics. Here is where I'll post the things related to my game, Wardge Tail.

Website: www.freewebs.com/vysegryp
Screens and a demo are also on that site.

Info:

My game uses the standard battle system in rm2k3 as I still don't know specifically how to tweak it to be... well... more intersting or something.
Right now, the demo is pretty short. It only contains dialogue for the intro, so no action yet.

Story:
I don't want to reveal specifics, but it is the story of an outlaw, named Lee. It opens up in a desert town, where the main character, Lee, is attacked by some townspeople. He is saved by a mysterious man who is a part of a crew that offers Lee a place in their group. Lee declines, but discovers someone that convinces him to change his mind. So he eventually accepts, and the story begins. It follows him, his monkey, and his new crewmates across many lands. If I told you too much more, I think it'd ruin the story a little, so that's all for now.

Currently, I'm basically by myself, but if someone becomes interested and wants to help out, just contact me. Thanks for reading, and please post your comments as criticism can be constructive. One of the problems I've seen in it myself is the timing and appropriate placing of midis to "set the mood." Also, if it seems like a rushed a certain part, please tell me. Help with that is also appreciated.
And it's my first game...be gentle.

[Linkizcool]

Well, reveal the specifics so we can comment on it.

[ZONIC.]

i wanna know more! whats gonna happen? enemies? more story! screenshots! and how ur comic looks? :p