MY FRIST OWN GAME!!!

[Darrellito]

i'm making a game on my own called 'the chosen one'. its about a king who is impowered by a witch to be king forever (he gets a kinda imortality). The king had to make the witch queen in return. well the main character in the story is the only one that can kill this evil king, but only if he can master his gift as the chosen one. the main character is going to be traveling around on contenents training and gathering a party and having side storys for the party memebers. There will be no sequals for this one!!! I'll have some screen shots for it on my website when i have my site up in running again.

[Ryos4]

Interesting concept though u think u spelled continents wrong and members for that matter.

Aside from your grammer problems it sounds like a promising game.  But i wonder why this kid is so special that he has the ability to kill someone who is pretty much imortal, and why is he going to, is he a bad king?  It would be interesting if it turned out to be his own son or something.  Where he starts as a spoiled brat who wants to be king for selfish reason but changes as he travels.

[Darrellito]

Yeah i'm gonna put a sorta darkside thing in the game that if you choose to do the wrong thing, it'll change the game, and he's suposed to be so special cause he's just one of those proficisy or whatever things. you know like in harry potter, he's supposed to be the only one to survive the death curse.

[Ryos4]

Well that not really a prophecy, the Harry Potter thing.  Its what happened.  It was never prophesized.  Now matrix would be a good analogy for this, or even that episode of Futurama where Bender becomes pharaoh.

[Darrellito]

well if you read the fifth or sixth book, it is prophisised, and thats why voldemort went after harry, cause some dumba** phsycic told voldemort harry would be the only  one that coud stop him. not to get off subject, my site is up now.


http://www.freewebs.com/darrellito

[Ryos4]

Eh w/e, my bad i guess though im too lazy to look it up.  That was to long ago to really remember.  But the only reason that Harry was really a threat was because he went after him.  Is that whats gonna happen to this kid?  Nice to have something a King did to come back and bite him in the @$$. lol

Btw are you typing like really fast or just cant spell? Voldemort i think is how it was spelled, "He who must not be named." W/e.

[Darrellito]

yeah i type too fast and am too lazy to go back and fix it. anything that happens to the kid will be detrmined by what the person playing does. i'm going to make it almost completly customizable.

[Ryos4]

I mean is he the "chosen one" because of something the king did, or is he just some random person.  I find it would be a better story if the king was some how involved in creating his greatest enemy.  Cause i find randomness to be quite boring.

And yes i understand that it was a prophecy.  But just being that is kinda boring and leaves me feeling empty inside.

[Darrellito]

well, the king knew about the having the an enemy, but he didn't know who. he thinks that if he waits till he see signs in some of his pesant children, he'll kill that child. thats why i'm going to have him as a bad king, and cause he's greedy. He saw the signs in the main charachter, Kain, and tryed to kill him, but Kain bearly avoided being killed from what little control over the power he had at and early age.