New Game

[redwallmax]

I was wondering what you guys thought of my new game idea.
It opens with a man standing in a church wearing pure white armour. His name if Rach his father was a paladin and his father before him and now its Rachs turn. Durring his first year of Being a guard for the church a war is declared by a small terroist group know as the Gambits. This group has been working there way into power for years and they have finally gotten controll of the Millitary. Now they think there ready to Strike.


There first act is to destroy Aracia the town where the castle and Rachs church is. So one night when Rach is In the church when all of a sudden the doors burst open and in come the soldiers Rach trys his hardest to defend the church but hes not strong enough. Durring his fight he cut across the face and loses his eye. And falls unconcious

When Rach wakes up he finds him self he is in a small camp. He looks around and sees a man sitting by a fire. This is Pike a young first year soldier who when he saw Rach put his life on the line to defend the church he realized that what he was doing was wrong and rescued rach and took him to this camp to get well.

After Pike Explains himself to Rach he is more trustworthy but not much more. Rach desides that he needs to go back to Aracia and see the dammage. Pike persuadeds Rach to let him come along nd they set out for Aracia. thats when the adventure realy starts
and Rach must set out on an adventure to prove himself as a paladin and finds out much more than he ever realy wanted.


Characters-

Rach- a loner at heart not a very trusting person. Always sees the worst in people.

Pike- A young soldier that found out what the Gambits where planing before it was to late.

  Gee- a former court jester that has the abbility to use magic

[Daetyrnis]

That's a nice start to a story, good job! ^_^

Though you may want to learn the difference between there and their.

[yuio tokido]

hey not bad I wanna hear the rest

[runeforger]

you said his eyes got cut out, how coud he see the guy by the fire

[Krynth]

Only one of his eyes got cut out...

[runeforger]

in most cases, you woul still be blind for a while, unless he woke bout 2 months after the eye cutting

[Meiscool-2]

Originally posted by runeforger
in most cases, you woul still be blind for a while, unless he woke bout 2 months after the eye cutting

In most cases, shutup.

[A Forgotten Legend]

Its a GAME, its supposed to have things that contridict real life.