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Offline lilsniffs3

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The World I Created (Demo released!)
« on: July 06, 2008, 11:19:56 PM »
Ian was on his computer when the Angel came. Without any choice, Ian was thrown into a portal. The portal, that led to his realm. His realm of imagination. "The World He Created." Everything he ever created or thought of was in the world. Especially, the evil. Ian then finds out that his friends are also stuck in the world, now with weaponry. Ian and his friends must fight an army and find the secrets of the mysterious group "The NightShades."

Characters from Earth
Ian- Me. A swordsman who can use his blood to form weapons and shapes.
Matthew- A scythe wielder who uses darkness as his only source of magic.
Chris- A guitarist who's riffs can shatter bones.
Rainiel-A werewolf who uses a scimitar.
Daniel- A Summoner.
Camilo- A gunner. Pretty much can use any gun possible. Just like Snake in SSBB.
Kyle- A person with a giant butter knife.
Isabella- A fighter and an aid, who can heal anybody. Part of McKenna's pirate group.
McKenna- A pirate. ARRGGHH!
Jeremy- A boy with a sword and a strong pistol. His sword is accurate but weak, and his gun the opposite. He can combine the two for a strong accurate shot.

Hero Characters from the new world
Reyon- A swordsman who is basically a stronger version of Ian, but with more skills, etc. A traveler from Greenvale.
Artox-An archer/swordsman who can transform into both a fallen angel and a holy angel, whose swords also tranform along, and his 3 swords (One per form) can combine for a super sword. From Greenvale.
Aerias- The prince of Greenvale who plays a mystical flute called the "Grenwood Flute."
Villains
Ensis- A human that was cursed and tranformed into a large beast. Leader of an evil army (Not yet named,) but isn't the leader of the NightShades.
Denteyuto- The second-in-command to Ensis, the leader of the NightShades, who's father was a famed blacksmith. He is the rival of Reyon, and later on Ian.
Terra- An old friend of Reyon who was told that her family was killed by Reyon and Artox (Really killed by Denteyuto and Ensis) and vowed to take revenge on them. Steals a pirate ship and kidnaps Mckenna and most of her crew, except Isabella. A member of the NightShades.
Fenrir- A werewolf hunter who works with the NightShades. His main target is Rainiel.

Enemies
KillBots-Robots found at labs who are only suppose to kill those who oppose Ensis.
Soul Reapers- Orcs in heavy armor with scythes, who's main target is Matthew.
Orcs- Evil elf eared creatures.
Archer- An archer for the evil army.
Swordsman- A swordsman for the evil army.
Cavalry- Spearman on horses for the evil army.
Pirates- Pirates on neither side who are on a search for McKenna and her crew.
SquidHeads- Humans who have squids for heads. They use spears.
Renegade- A dark swordsman.
Doppleganger- Evil sillouettes of the heros.
Gunner- A gunman for the evil army.

Factions of the Hero Army
Greenvale Vigilante Heroes- A group of Greenvale citizens who use everyday weapons to fight against the evil army.
Class of '09- The children from Earth.
Arching Steeds- A group of Archers who work with centaurs to take down the villains.

Factions of the Evil Army
Typhe Army- An army of monsters and soldiers within the Typhe Region.
NightShades- A group of coat wearing Ensis followers.
Dragonmen- A clan of humans with dragon wings and dragon riders.
Settings
Earth- Do I have to say?
Greenvale- An area including a castle, it's surrounding town, forest, and plains. Found in the Riath Region.
Typhe Lab- A large lab in the Typhe Region.
Areth- A technology advanced city, close to the Typhe Lab. Capital of the Typhe Region.
Lake Oasis- A desert city just off of the Typhe border.
Weston- A small town located in the Riath Region.
Mount Zelyth: A mountain lair for the Dragonmen. In the Riath Region.
Delyor Gates- The gates at the borders of Riath and Typhe. The guards are VERY strict.


McKenna's Cell Escape
Download links (Tell me when link dies out) 2.49 MB:
http://rapidshare.com/files/179903667/TheWorldICreated.lzh.html

 
 
« Last Edit: January 10, 2009, 09:34:15 PM by lilsniffs3 »
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2008, 12:01:41 AM »
I forget. Did the other version have loads of fan characters and stuff?

EDIT: Ah, No it didn't. Okay. Forget that.

I suggest putting in one more character or it'll feel less like you're selecting a party and more like you're choosing the one to leave out. That is, if you're putting a party choosing system in there.
« Last Edit: July 07, 2008, 12:04:52 AM by Moosetroop11 »
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2008, 12:57:16 AM »
Actually, I'm calling everyone in real life, but these were the confirmed descriptions that they wanted.
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Offline Fisherson

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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2008, 02:03:29 AM »
I like it,nice work would like to see some screen shots
and features.
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Offline lilsniffs3

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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2008, 09:38:50 PM »
Made some changes to the story and added 3 characters.

Two screenshots of the first scene, which is my house. (I am switching the charset, but later.)



I am right now removing the white parts of the faceset.
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Offline Hirochi-Zangus

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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2008, 01:22:32 AM »
I'm looking forward to this game. Nice facesets!
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #6 on: July 08, 2008, 01:35:06 AM »
Hey lil'sniffs, you are being hit with the Font Bug. You Gotta Copy the Font from RPG maker into ur Windows Font to make it Space properly.

Also: Recently Showed

should say: Recently Shown

It looks Entertaining Though
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #7 on: July 08, 2008, 02:52:14 AM »
Lol,i like you inteiror chipset and newer face set.
It looks good I realy want to play this game.Keep up the good work!
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Offline lilsniffs3

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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #8 on: July 08, 2008, 06:32:29 AM »
A bit of storyline:

[spoiler] Ian entered his room with boredom. As he uses his computer, an angel teleports there. The angel tries to negotiate Ian into coming with her. After a declined offer, the angel teleports him.

He is teleported to a small hill area. He talks to a man, asking where he is. He was in a town called Greenvale, a town under seige at the moment. The man says his name is Reyon, and  assumes Ian is there for the first time. Reyon shows Ian to his house, and tells him he can stay there whenever he wants. He also says that the manmade cave leads to the town.

Ian heads to town, and talks to a child his age. The boy was dressed up like an assassin. He looks at him carefully, and knows who it was. Rainiel. Ian heads farther down to a path blocked by guards. The guards were protecting Town Square from unwanted visitors.

Ian heads back to the cave. As he walks in, he spots 2 people in black coats. One of them is called "Blackbird". Reyon walks in and the coat wearers take out weapons. Reyon tosses a large sword and a coat over to Ian, mentioning that it's gonna get chilly. He takes out another sword. Here starts the first battle.

Reyon, in the end, calls an ice storm on them. Reyon and Ian win, but the dark coats fade into darkness.

What comes next?
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« Last Edit: July 08, 2008, 07:19:33 PM by lilsniffs3 »
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #9 on: July 08, 2008, 07:19:18 AM »
"Was" called Blackbird? Is he not called Blackbird anymore, or your just talking in the future tense cause u know he dies.

I dont like when people throw large swords at me :P

"Was" in Greenvale: As in Where the angel Teleport him from (where Ian lives? Assuming he doesnt know his own town) Or is there where he teleported too? Some of the wording is throwing me off a bit. Or maybe im just paying to much attention lol

Sounds pretty Linear but im assuming this is the Intro type deal.

Also because this is "ian's mind's World" does he have some recollection of who some people or things are? or is he just a clueless guy in a random world?
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #10 on: July 08, 2008, 07:17:01 PM »
I refer in past tense because I'm trying to tell a story.

I meant like toss, not chuck the sword. Reyon flips the sword over their heads and Ian grabs it.

It is his world, but they were all, ALL, his important thoughts were stuck into the world, such as dreams. So, Ian might have had them in a dream, but payed little attention.

Anyway, I'll reword it a bit.
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #11 on: July 08, 2008, 08:40:51 PM »
Anyway, do you mean copy the fonts folder into my windows fonts? Or just everything inside?
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #12 on: July 09, 2008, 12:33:15 AM »
Well mainly what ever font ur games using. put it into te windows font folder.

Then the text will display properly.
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #13 on: July 10, 2008, 07:20:40 PM »
[spoiler]Reyon and Ian head back to town. As they get out of the cavern, a guard is knocked out and sent flying. They look towards Rainiel and see he is fighting 3 soldiers with no help. They both go to help him defeat the soldiers. All of them head to Town Square, where a great battle is going on.

Rainiel runs fast towards the enemies and disappears Suddenly, lots of slashes hit the enemies, and Rainiel appears again. With a weakened enemy army, they get help from the Greenvale Army to fight the leftover army. A minotaur ran behind Ian but when Ian turned around, it was lying on the ground. They looked up and saw the movement of a gun.

Ignoring it, the 3 recieve medals for their honor. They had a task assigned by the mayor to capture and escort a band of female pirates to town square to be sent to prison. [/spoiler]


And, if anyones wondering, "Blackbird'' is a codename.

Really Really big spoiler just in case I don't finish the game. Don't click if you don't want to spoil a plot element.

[spoiler]Blackbird is Denteyuto. Blackbird kills one of his own members for leaving the group, and before that, Ian fought Denteyuto, beating him by breaking his sword, had the chance to kill him, hoping for him to change his ways. A side story will reveal more to Denteyuto's past, which shows that his heart is black, a sign in their world that means that they are pure evil. The darker the heart, the eviler.[/spoiler]
« Last Edit: July 10, 2008, 07:33:02 PM by lilsniffs3 »
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Re: The World I Created (NEWER VERSION)
« Reply #14 on: July 10, 2008, 08:50:14 PM »
lol Lilsniffs, you make me laugh.

I like it so far. Although your Grammar is even worse than mine :D
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