Started a new game, please give opinions about it.

[Hirochi-Zangus]

No name yet

You start out as Kalvin, the main character, out in the middle of some woods just gaining consiousness. He forgot mostly everything except for the fact that he was running before he got knocked out. There is a training facility nearby where you gain consiousness and decide to stay while a woddsman cutts down a path to the River Bank. In the training facility you learn how to use Mag Skillz (basically magic) and you can trian on rocks for strength, Mag circle for intelligence, and get beaten by a minotuar for defence. You learn many thing from the Mage, Trainer, and the man who owns the facility, Pro. After a mission to go kill a Behemoth, the Training King bans you from the Training facility for having too much strength, strength that can kill a creature he'd never seen been killed by 1 mere human. You are then forced to take a ferry to a new continent and to expand your horizions as you figure out who you are...

Characters Facesets to come

Kalvin Porter, 18, Swordsman, Swords

Kalvin has always been quite helpful when it comes to gaining a reward,
but he can never pass up an opprotunity to fight. He will always be logical,
but never quite constructive when it comes to battles, especially 1-on-1
battles. He will always look for a way he can win by trickery or quickly,
especially against an opponent he knows he may not be able to beat with
brute force. He is the leader of his party.

# 284, 17, Assassin, Katanas

She is a test subject for the Fastest Assassins. She works for AOG (Assassins
of Girdante) which is a rebel group to destroy the kingdom of Gidrante. She
is the first to have survived the testing and is also a failure. The only side
effect to have barely surviving the experiment was the red eyes she possesses
called Arcana Eyes. They are called Arcana Eyes because of the project's
name, Arcana. True to her self, she blames Girdante for her being. She was
sent on a mission to intercept a ship carrying rations to Girdante.

Duael (Jet Gadoon), 24, Gunslinger, Guns

Very intelligent yet controled by the grand force of Girdante, he is force under
work to retrive the missing king. He researches all of his opponents before
facing them (ofcourse under Girdante rule) and decides how to deal with them.
When facing Kalvin and # 284, he realizes how much potential they have and
decides to leave Girdante and his powers behind. He now has no memory of
ever fighting Kalvin or anything before that. He only remembers his life
before he was under Girdante rule. His professionalism is Guns. He knows
of a secret that when using a Dawn Shot 29, there is a button that can trigger a 40+
combo attack!

Celis Forgen, X, White Mage, Staffs
Celis is a girl from Feebely who worked selling potions that cured diseasese
that killed people and animals. She is still poor and hopes that one day someone
will save her from her horrible life. That day comes when Kalvin and # 284 reach
the end of their ferry ride and travel to Feebely. She sees that Kalvin is troubled
and asks to help them. She tries to heal him by using a very difficult Mag Skillz called
Past Revival which returns the memory of whoever is casted with the spell.
She tries as hard as she can and almost kills Kalvin in the process. She fails miserably.
She nows travels with her companions Kalvin and # 284, and also her secret lover...

Volcanis Gregory, 26, Heatstar, Gauntlets
Volcanis as a boy grew up on the same island you find him on, Volcanra.
His parents were stranded on the island over 30 years ago and decided to make
the best of it. Volcanis is the guardian of the mountain and has one goal before
passing on to the afterlife, defeat the dragon that dwells within the Mountain
Caverns. His main Mag Skillz is Burn and Inferno. He only uses gauntlets and
will not use any armor. He believes that armor is for the ones who are weak and can't
take a hit. If you help him on your journey you will get a special item only found on Volcanra.

The X means I don't know what I'm going to put in there yet.
OPTIONAL CHARACTERS

Berserker, N/A, Berserker, Gauntlets

Scared at most times, Berserker is very friendly and likes to be called "Friend". She
works for Moribund, one of the leaders of Girdante, and is one of the lower class
Berserker. She helps you in combat only when you help her. She knows Duael, but
because of the certain event he doesn't remember her. She figures out a plot to ruin
Semal, a great continent containing a small village and a wide desert, and
decides to join your party permenantly, but the only problem is what the others think
of her...

Other characters still in progress...

Please give me your opinions about the story and characters I have more but It's still in progress! 

[Moosetroop11]

Looks good so far. D'you have any screenshots?

[Fisherson]

Hmm its sounds interresting,do you have any screen shots or feutures?

[rpgjuno11]

  Sounds promising.

[Hirochi-Zangus]

I have some screenshots but I drew on them because I had requests about them. I'll make some now.

[Hirochi-Zangus]

Here are the screenshots!

[A Forgotten Legend]

Rtp... in the second scrren the entire left side needs more to it.  Its really empty.  Also, I'm not much of the fan of doing that with the water and grass =/ .  Looks ok for just starting the game though.

Lucas: ...curse you for posting. It made me revise my post. >.>

[Hirochi-Zangus]

To Lucas - I'm 15.

To Forgotten Legend - It's empty so you can have room to move around!  And I really don't quite understand what you mean about "doing that with the water and grass." Is it the maze? Because That is kinda temporary...

[lilsniffs3]

I kinds dislike your system graphics.

it should be 1 big gradient.

[Hirochi-Zangus]

I kinds dislike your system graphics.

it should be 1 big gradient.

Could you explain?

[lilsniffs3]

In your message boxes, you should have it look like 1 block of colors, not 3.

It's probably an error with RM.

[Hirochi-Zangus]

It's supposed to be 3 different colors. Top - light, middle - color, bottom - darker color. You can barely notice it.

Ohhh! I understand now! The message box is 3 blocks of color... It's something I'm going to change. Thanks for noticing!

[RockJohnAxe]

Whats a Woddsman?

Looks like a good first game although a little stale

The Story although seems Very open, doesnt look like it could go anywhere too exciting.

Keep practicing, You learn alot just by using the Program. My Mapping Skills have Triple from what they were when i started.

[lilsniffs3]

He means a lumberjack.

[Fisherson]

RTP..yeah you need a better chip set,have you been to the CR?We've got hundreds,litteraly!
I'm sure we've got what you need.