Some guitar stuff (in video format)

[Hell Angel]

Heading in the right direction, Des. You can definately rock.

Ignore Archem, for some reason he's expecting some kind of top-notch ****, instead of taking it for what it is. Just a cool jam with a nice rhythm. You can keep speed alright and you know what to do. Now you just got to get a hang of actually doing it.

Heading in the right direction, man.

[Archem]

Don't discredit my opinion, you ***hole! I gave it because he asked, and it's clearly a major repetitive piece of chords! I'm hardly expecting anything top-notch, but I am expecting something memorable or enjoyable instead of bland and similar, especially after seeing some of his other videos!

Step on my toes again, and I'll rip your ****ing head off.

[Hell Angel]

... ... ...

*step* :3

[fruckert]

*runs from shitstorm*

[Uberpwn_w00t]

Mmm, getting violent in here are we?

Anyway, for a rhythm part, this is pretty good. You obviously have lots of skill and potential. If you had any kind of recording software, you could smack it onto a drum beat, layer some lead parts onto it, and it would sound great.

However, on it's own it is quite bland and repetitive.

[Desimodontidae]

Yeah... well thanks for the comments. The reason it was repetitive was because it's an actual song. There chorus, verse, all that good stuff. I wrote it, pretty much as it's presented in the video, me and my friend jammed on it and come up with something cool. It probably would sound better in context, vocals, drums, bass, etc... but.. meh.

Actually, it's a little longer than what I recorded, but I thought it was already repetitive enough...

I will post more. Hopefully I can get a jam with the band recorded.

[Desimodontidae]

Freshly uploaded. You may enjoy this one.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r0dbiqkXuig

[Archem]

See, that's infinitely better than the last one. It's entertaining, soulful, and has a melody. Try doing that whenever possible, and all is cool.

[Desimodontidae]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rGbbi4U-6kI