My V first song

[Red Giant]

Ok, so it's not quite finished, but I wanted an opinion on this short midi composition.
Remember, I have had no other midi composing experience.
Please post you're well thought out opinion.

Remember: Critisism makes me stronger! Strong enough to pound you flat, that is! Kidding.

[Red Giant]

Ignore that, this ones slightly tweaked and is better in the long run.

[Red Giant]

Slightly edited, tell me if you think it's better or worse.

[Dorgan]

Well its got a steady beat, and it sounds like it could be used somewhere in a game. Its better then anything i could do.

Make it longer i guess...

[Red Giant]

I will, this is just the beggining of the song.

[Darkfox]

I like how this is coming about, sounds familiar though but I know it's your own custom work.

[Red Giant]

I finished (?) it, and here it is in it's 2 minute glory!
Share your opinions, please, after all, I may decide to change it.
It's not really suited for use in games, but you could up the tempo and use it as battle music, I guess.

[Darkfox]

Sorta repetitive but overall very good!

[charaman]

definetly for i high-tension portion of a game. like the drums!  

[charaman]

i came back here so i could here this again! love it!