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Offline mrhawi

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« on: January 15, 2011, 10:34:07 PM »
Hi guys, i'm again here to show new stuff. i've composed 2 new themes, as the title says, these 2 originals are battle themes for RPG maker games, one is for normal battles, and the other is for boss battles :

Battle Theme:
http://www.goear.com/listen/fb09006/battletheme-mrhawi

Boss Theme
http://www.goear.com/listen/338ebf1/boss-theme-mid-mrhawi

well, any sugestion, comment or critics are welcome and apreciated, =)

PS: Sorry about my bad english

EDIT:

Battle Themes (these themes are a bit old):
MrHawi Style (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/0f636e9/mrhawi-style-mrhawi
Poder Lucha y Justicia (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/afe9ae1/poderluchajusticia-mrhawi
MrHawi Boss Theme (midi):http://goear.com/listen/019b55c/mrhawi-boss-theme-mrhawi
Encuentro Casual (midi): http://goear.com/listen/b0d5dd5/encuentro-casual-mrhawi

Other Themes (some of my recent stuff)
Sedatio V2 (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/87a07e5/sedatio-v2-mrhawi
En la Misticidad (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/37164e5/mrhawi-en-la-misticidad-mrhawi
« Last Edit: August 22, 2011, 05:14:41 PM by mrhawi »
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Offline Osmose1000

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Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 04:18:23 AM »
I like the themes. They're pretty good.

The drums are the only thing that sound very off. The crash cymbals distract me from the rest of the song.

Pretty cool!
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Offline drenrin2120

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Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 05:37:18 PM »
What the moose said. With no other cymbals, the crashes are a bit odd. The melody is very catchy and suits a battle system well!

The boss battle has a lot of potential, but some notes crash and the whole feels a little odd at parts. Still, it's a good boss theme, just work on them drums and focusing your melodies and chords to work better together!
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Offline mrhawi

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Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2011, 06:39:29 PM »
 Thanks for comments, yeah, drums isn't good, i suck  composing drums xD i will try to fix that and take the suggestions for future works. Well, i want to show another theme, is a town theme :

Town Theme
http://www.goear.com/listen/4cf2b81/melodia-pueblo-mrhawi

i hope that you like it, see ya!

PS: Sorry about my bad english again :).
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Offline A Forgotten Legend

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Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
« Reply #4 on: January 24, 2011, 04:49:58 AM »
I would either put the flute up an octave or use another instrument, because the lower is gets the more muddy the melody gets.
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Offline mrhawi

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Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
« Reply #5 on: February 06, 2011, 07:04:19 AM »
 Thanks for the suggestion A forgotten legend, i will try that =).

 Here another boss theme:

Special_Boss_Theme

see ya! =)
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Offline Gryphon Nanaya

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Re: 2 Original Battle Themes
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 12:03:39 AM »
Dude these themes rock! te special boss them souned a bit random at some parts but still sounded great!  :Plight:

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Offline mrhawi

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Re: MrHawi Gallery
« Reply #7 on: August 22, 2011, 04:16:53 AM »
Hi, thanks for comments =), i want to show more of my stuff:

Battle Themes (these themes are a bit old):
MrHawi Style (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/0f636e9/mrhawi-style-mrhawi
Poder Lucha y Justicia (Midi):http://goear.com/listen/afe9ae1/poderluchajusticia-mrhawi
MrHawi Boss Theme (midi):http://goear.com/listen/019b55c/mrhawi-boss-theme-mrhawi
Encuentro Casual (midi): http://goear.com/listen/b0d5dd5/encuentro-casual-mrhawi

Other Themes (some of my recent stuff)
Sedatio V2 (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/87a07e5/sedatio-v2-mrhawi
En la Misticidad (MP3):http://goear.com/listen/37164e5/mrhawi-en-la-misticidad-mrhawi

I hope that you like it. Comments, critics or suggestions are aprecciated, and if someone wants the midi files of the songs, i have no problem to give it =).

« Last Edit: August 22, 2011, 05:14:19 PM by mrhawi »
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Re: MrHawi Gallery
« Reply #8 on: August 23, 2011, 05:47:58 AM »
Wow, you've gotten way better since your last stuff! The boss theme sounded a bit like the Lufia Sinestral fight theme at first, but only enough to sound partially inspired (I could be wrong though). Really cool stuff!
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Offline mrhawi

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Re: MrHawi Gallery
« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2011, 04:48:42 PM »
 Thanks for the comment Osmose1000, and yup i was inspired in that theme =)

http://www.goear.com/listen/d5b3331/lufia-boss-theme-cover-by-mrhawi- (that theme is?)
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