Bright Darkness

[Lance Hiryuu]

Hmm... I think you should learn spelling, Pedro Lion. It was very hard to read that. But about as much as I understood, kind of good plot, but isn't that only the history? What about the story of the main character?

[oooog]

he did say previously that his english wasnt that great.

[Pedro Lion]

Originally posted by Lance Hiryuu
Hmm... I think you should learn spelling, Pedro Lion. It was very hard to read that. But about as much as I understood, kind of good plot, but isn't that only the history? What about the story of the main character?

He he... my english is not perfect, i know.The story continues, i had to get to lunch with my parents, now i'm back.

[Pedro Lion]

The humans and the elves lived together in harmony.Many humans had elfic blood in their veins.

But the gods built other worlds, and stoped to pay attention to the Earth.The gods were all Good.The Evil don't exist.Just ausence
of the gods.

Some humans lost the gods in their sipirit, and become "evil".They hated the elves, and the light and the sun.

Some of this evil humans had much power.They moved in to Rarganath,a ruined place in the east.

They covered their skies with dark smokes, and that place was in completely night.

Their ruler was Garon, the Demon King: an evil wizard with much power than the others.His power was greater than the gods power.When the gods saw it, was too late.They couldn't protect Yinlaid.

END OF PART III                                                          CONTINUES-

[Lance Hiryuu]

Good, good! It is great that you have a whole history for your world.  

[Pedro Lion]

Then the evil humans started to attacking other kingdoms.They created the orcs, an elf corruption(like Melkor in LOTR), and trolls,spectres,demons and evil dragons.

But the humans and the elves saw the danger coming, and attacked together liderated by Yanlil, the Human King; and Loulyin, the Elven King.

The power of the humans and the elves together was too much for Garon, he was killed in battle by Loulyin.Yanlil died fighting with a demon, his son, Fingand, take the throne.

END OF THE LITTLE PART IV          

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[oooog]

sounds good to me.

[Pedro Lion]

After the Purify War, the humans put vigilance towers around Rarganath, to clean all evil in that place.2000 years passed...

But one of the Trorkang gods(Rangorth) thinked the evil humans was right in try to get some "entertainment".

[GLOW]Garon corrupted him during the Purify War.He corrupted Rangorth's heart to become evil.[/GLOW]

Rangorth gone to Yinlaid and become the ruler of an army of more powerful demons, orcs, evil dragons and dark creatures.

The gods were imortal because the Good habited their spitits.Rangorth, with almost completely ausence of Good in his spirit, become almost mortal.

The humans and the elves knew the only way to kill Rangorth is to make him become completely evil, and then, kill him.But the Light People didn't know how to make a god becoma completely evil.

END OF PART V

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[Pedro Lion]

But the gods helped them.The others gods didn't can destroy other god.But they can help the humans and the elves.They created the dwarfs, a strong race who worked with stones in mines, and importants in the battle.

They created the Light Dragons to fight with the Evil Dragons.And the greater help ot them was:they sent the Istari(Mages) like they did in middle-earth(LOTR),they sent 5 Istari:(Klangor, the White Mage, to fight Rangorth's forces;Paladin,the Blue Mage, to purify the evil that exists out of Rarganath;Alatan,the Red Mage, to fight with the countries allied with Rangorth;Helmang, the Brown Mage, to alert the good creatures of the Rangorth's danger;and Trakduin, the Light Mage, to fight with Rangorth.

The fisic form of them was old men, but strong.

END OF PART VI

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[Pedro Lion]

Perhaps, it was impossible to destroy a god without make him completely evil.Then, the gods created the [GLOW]Dark Saphire[/GLOW].This artifact makes your owner completely evil.But they had to make Rangorth find the Dark Saphire and take that to himself.

So, the gods created a big fountain of power inside the Dark Saphire.To combat the Dark Saphire, they created the Bright Darkness, a white gem with a power that only can be used by who has no evil in his spirit.

So, the evil dragon, Margon, bring the Dark Saphire to Rangorth, and the Dark Saphire devoured his heart.Rangorth become the most evil spirit in Yinlaid.

And then, the elven princess, Tilüin used the Bright Darkness against Rangorth.And his spirit was subjuged.But in the battle, the Dark Saphire and the Bright Darkness become lost, and disapeared of the legends knowledge.

END OF THE STORY

I HOPE YOU LIKED IT.  

[X-F3R]

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el http: //www.freetranslations.com

¡Goce!

a propósito, no es que exacto tan esto no puede ser correcto: D

[Kijuki_Magazaki]

lol x, he's game is not in spanish tho, I beleive is in portuguese. Am I right?

[Lance Hiryuu]

Hmmm? So, what about the main character? How is he related to the plot?

[WarxePB]

Whoa. Awesome background. That's gonna be a great intro.

[Pedro Lion]

I'm brazilian, and my game will be in portuguese.
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The real intro appears after the protagonist remeber who he is.
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The gods sacrificed theirselfvs giving power to Dark Saphire.They was replaced by some other gods sent with less power.The protagonist is one of them, but he renunciated to that glory and came to Earth to become a normal human living as thief.Falco is his name.