Secret Of Broadskah

[Frosty]

here is the game's story...
I hope you like it...
I will post screen shots and stuff later on..
Im quite buzy with the game right now...
----------------------------------------------------------------------
*******STORY********
I remember when my sixth grade
teacher told us about the legend
of Broadskah.
...I was so scared then.
He told us about the wars
and he also told us about
the jewels of Broadskah.

I can't beleive that many would
fight over a stupid rock.
But it's no ordinary rock.
This one can give you strong
power and if it falls in the
wrong hands,we could all die.

I would never have beleived this
legend,before I found the jewel.
But now I understand.

I held the jewel in in my palm.
I began to think about the legend.
Then I felt it.The most incredible
feeling I've ever felt before.
I felt like I could take on the world.
But I couln't...
I would never have the heart to do
so.I could never watch over the
people fall before me.I wouldn't be
able to live with myself.

I tough about this alot.


I know that if I take this quest...



...It will change my life for ever.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Website:
http://www.bravesoft.tk

[Pedro Lion]

sorry but this story is very cliched.the same story of LOTR.try to invent another one.

[GhostClown]

and the name seems aweful familair, hmmm?

[Frosty]

LOTR?is that lord of the ring?
I dont even know the story of that..and it doeset resemble the movie..you guys all ok?"on the flu?"

[GhostClown]

I think your the one on the flu!

[Frosty]

Lmao..Im frosty..
Im out in cold all winter...
Of course i have the flu...


HEY ISNT THIS POST FOR A GAME???UHHH MINE!!!

[Red Giant]

Did you pay attention to the movie?!
Powerful ring? Whoever possess' it has ultimate power? Everyone at war to get it? Quest to destroy it?

[Pedro Lion]

that's what i said.i like to read and i read the book about 5 times(i know i'm stupid doing that but i liked it too much), and the story is the same, just changed the ring by a jewel.

[Frosty]

woa..freaky...
what ever i spent all day doing this story...
im not changing a word..

[Red Giant]

Originally posted by Pedro Lion
i read the book about 5 times(i know i'm stupid doing that but i liked it too much)

That doesn't make you stupid.

[Pedro Lion]

thanks that u dont find me stupid.my mother thought so when i read that.

[Frosty]

hahaha...
my foster parents think that charas-project and msn are anty social!

[RPG LORD]

Originally posted by GhostClown212
and the name seems aweful familair, hmmm?

Hyrule from Zelda, yes

[SonicChaos7]

Have fun working on an already made story.

[ES2005]

Originally posted by SonicChaos7
Have fun working on an already made story.

What a dumb thing to say. I mean, come on. We ALREADY
know that Frosty knows that the story is a bit of a cliché. And what a mean way to say it.