First Game I ever made.

[Redemption]

       The Name of my Game is  La Evangelio : Exorcism Division      
They're big they're bad and they're girls. Join 4 girls in a world where monsters thrive and the land is at war. The story is about a group of girls trying to save the world. That's right. It's the girl's turn to kick arse, and they do they almost too well.
     The main character is a 17 year old girl named Claire Revois who is loud, vain, self-centered, smart-mouth, and shes gonna kick some ***. She has been sent in La Evangelio and joined the Exorcism Division. She is honest and doesn't like annoying people.
      The second character is Krisla Laci is the type of person that is gonna piss off Claire. She talks a lot and annoys the hell out of people. And worst.. shes the teacher's pet, boy you don't want her in your class.                                                                              
     The third character is cute innocent lil' girl being dragged along with the group. She's clumsy and always get into trouble. Meet Mint Sier!! Cute Cuddly and hates bugs.
      Our last and final member is gonna be Sakura Shinto, a Japanese foreign exchange student. Shes really weird and like to make fun of people. Don't ever trust her.
      Watch as how these 4 girls destined by fate to get into this school and how they're gonna save the world from a diabolical demon. I'm gonna start out a title now. Tell me if its good.

[GhostClown]

uh thanks for the character profiles, but I'd love to hear the story!

[Redemption]

Ok the story begins when the Claire wake up. She was about to leave home when she received a mail saying :
       Dear Mr and Mrs. Revois,
   We would like to congratulate your daughter on how well she did with physical education and would like to enroll her to La Evangelio's Exorcism's Exorcism Division, we hope that she would be glady to be accepted to this honorable school and it's program. Further more we would of course love to give her special tutor since her grades are very low. But since she is very good with sports lets try and help her raise her grades a bit ok? One hour and thirty minutes are school with our best teacher Mr. Delacroix. He is excellent with english and math. We'll be sure to torture her- ah i mean educate her so that she would be able to attend this high school.
    If you do not wish to go to this school you're and idiot.
                                                                Sincerely,
                                 School Principal, Mr. Slate Minori
P.S. This is written by a kid who is instructed by the prinicipal to write this letter.


      Didn't bother to read the first sentence Eclaire threw away the paper.
       A few days later her parents found the letter and well.. lets just say she has no choice but to go. ^^;;