Eternal Flame

[sk8rman]

here we go...
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                                     storyline

   long ago, humans and dragons lived in peace. they shared eachothers knowlege and befriended each other. they thought of it as paradise. no wars. no fights. just world peace.
   there were few crimes,and when, they were always mild. like stealing a draught. when then, they were severly punished so the bad would not turn into the evil and spread.
   then one day, an evil man by the name of [? ?] and his henchmen started a riot in the town with his dark magic. they burned the dragon's houses and tortured the dragons. the dragons fought back, but had failed.
   when all hope seemed to be lost, the **sacred ones** came and sealed [?? ] away into another dimension.
   right before [? ] he went in the portal, he cursed, mumbled a few words, and claimed he would return.
   **the land was protected by the "7 sacred ones". 4 of them were humans and 3 were dragons. these sacred ones were the best of the best. the stongest, smartest, and loyal of them all.**
   the next few weeks, the humans became more evil and created more and more crimes. they also started to hate the dragons. the sacred ones had wondered if [ ??] had caused this. they looked on thier people and decided so. they also decided that the dragons should be moved to another world so no harm would be done.
   the dragons fled without word to the humans. no one has seen a dragon to the date. nor the sacred ones.
   that was 3000 years ago. today is now.
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                                 main charecters

name:Xaivier [??]
age:16
hair:black
eyes:blue
bio: Bad boy type. born in the town of wayside ridge in 2014. has a mother a father and a twin brother named ross.
intellegence: highly over average
fighting skills:high


name: Ross
age:16
hair:dark green (hey, i needed some anime in it!!)
eyes:blue
bio: unpopular, but isnt a geek. born in the town of wayside ridge in 2014. has a mother a father and a twin brother named Xaivier. has a girfriend named liz.
intellegence: lightly under avereage
fighting skills:highly advanced



name: liz
age:16
hair: [not sure]
eyes: blue
bio: Cute and funny Gal. born in the town of wayside ridge in 2014. has a mother and a step father. is an only child. has a boyfriend named Ross.
intellegence: sub-genius
fighting skills: average


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                             extra stuff 2 know

well my game is gonna first come out in rtp2k, then rtp2k/3, then rmxp. i am doing this because i want my game 2 have different perspectives.

i will be coming out with a demo when i have enough stuff 2 put it together. well, i have the stuff, but im not the best programmer so itll take awhile.

i put [] things where i dont know what the name is or what it is gonna be. please help me with that.

i also think the title of my game is gonna be called "Eternal Flame", but i dont know if there is already a game called like that. tell me if there is.

please rate my game storyline 1 out of 10!!!!!

i will give updates soon!!!

   ~sk8~

 

[Revolution911]

well, i see dragons as animals....no real important information to be told

[sk8rman]

animals?

[GaryCXJk]

OMFG!!! You're making a Carpenter fangame!!!

But I still like the Atomic Kitten version.

[sk8rman]

huh? c'mon! seriously people!

[DragonBlaze]

In most games Dragons are evil. They riad towns, hoard treasure, ect. So its good to see a game where they are not all evil.

As for the story, having 13 (i think that was the number) people/dragons seal and guard away an evil guy is kinda clitche. Other than that though its good.

I don't think there was ever a game called Eternal Flame or The Eternal Flame. I once started on a project called the eternal blaze. I got a demo out but I abandoned it, if i do start to work on it again, it is very doubtfull that I will keep the same name.

[Trikitiger]

That's a pretty good storyline, good description from past to present, and nice job keeping the bad guy secret.  There's only one thing I would like to know, is how that the beginnng starts... because I could have that same beginning, but only have the sacred ones either mentioned or visited once.  But one suggestion for the game would be something like having the hero learn about that from someone, or be somewhere reading the inscriptions of it.  And if you're making it fan-made (which I don't care if you do), mention some stuff from the thing you're making the game from, for example, I started my fan Pokemon game 2 years ago, and because it's Pokemon related, I added in a few Kanto and Johto references, not much, but still some to let the game players know it's not entirely mine.  Keep up the good work, and hope that you bring out a demo that's really good!

And btw GaryCXJk, don't get uppity about these games.  Aslong as no one sells the games they make with RPGM they're ok, besides, I don't mind finding a fan-game of an anime, but that's just me, and if you really don't like the fact that alot of people make fan-games, leave it to yourself.

[sk8rman]

ok, thanx guys. ill chang it to the 7 sacred ones. is that good? yeah, this was originally a fan game off of fire emblem. i thought it was a really good game so i made it like that. but then i changed it around so it wouldnt because i wanted it to be unique.

and yeah, that is how the game starts. it is gonna be lightly in black and white the beggining movie, then it'll go in color. "i dont think were in kansas anymore!"

[SonicChaos7]

A number of sacred people or things is overused, but if you play to your strengths, you might be able to make it stand out from the rest of the games that have that kinda stuff in it.

[sk8rman]

i want a number of "sacred guys because i want like the main charecter 2 like each 1 in a different place or somethn like that.

[sk8rman]

sry 4 double post

ok, to start my game i need the essentials. i would be glad if ppl would help me. i need:

 

a good title screen.

im thinking of a dragon breathing fire. the dragon should b red if i am asking 2 much.
 

a game over screen.

i looked in the complete resource section and i didnt really find anything i was looking for. i need somthn unique 'bout it.

a faceset and chipset that fits the description of Liz.

nuff said.

thank u for the cooperation. i will try 2 find stuff myself also. i will mention names in my credits for any1 who helps me!

    ~sk8~

[sk8rman]

i am finnaly back! i took a break from my game,but im back!!!

anyway, i need your comments. i was gonna have this game over, made by the brave...

[sk8rman]

then i saw this 1 made by star strider. which 1 is best?

[DragonBlaze]

The first one is kick ***! Anyway since I think this will be a cool game, I'll be willing to make graphics for you if you want (charsets, facesets, battle char sets, ect)  

[sk8rman]

all i need now is some dragon charsets. if u would help me, i would be thankful.it would help.