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[Calvern]

Here's a Screenshot of my game. Yeah, i know, all RTP but hey, give me a break, it's my very first game! 8P lol  

[linkline91]

it looks ok! If you need help i'm good!!

[Al~Len]

Okay.. umm, I'm no expert with map making.. but that just doesn't really look right to me.. The layout is too.. umm.. not sure how to put it. The placement of the trees and what not is too bland kinda.. in Allen's opinion..

Not trying to rain on your parade or anything, since you said it's your first game and all.. Just needs some work is all..

[Calvern]

kk, thanks. see if this works. trying to get my title screen up there...

[Calvern]

Thanks for being honest at least, lol. Prolly would explain the trees and all if i can get u a screenshot of that hole town, then u might understand it a lil better. but thats. yeah, My very first game and just started yesterday. Have a friend i hang with in RL who also has RM2k3 and  participates in these forums helping me out atm with controls... but yeah, first game so will take all hits like a man  lol. But yeah, thanks for being honest and will accept all tips. thanks

[Al~Len]

*claps* I'm really liking the title screen, very chic.
I'll look forward to your progress on thisthough, it does seem intriguing to me.

[Calvern]

Thank you Al~len

[haku2pure]

it does need alot of work... keep on werking tho

[1samu]

can i join too ? i'm a newbie. from indonesia ( do ya know this country ?, i'm not too good in English. i'm sorry if there's anything wrong with my grammar or else )
here's my screenshot. it's only a test game that use CBS. i try to make it like FF X Aeon call.

not too good isn't it ?

[Trevlac]

Calvern...is your last name by any chance.....CALVERT?

ON TOPIC:  Nice map but I do belive it needs a bit of refining.  Here's couple of tips:  The fence that goes out up one square then up and back is kinda pointless.  Think about in real life how they would build the fences.

Also, the gorund pieces are a little square.  For the snow, use the one that has a bit of grass on the end but just use the Ctrl and Shift keys (try experimenting with them) when you lay a piece down.  Same goes for the ground.   Eventually you'll get it though.  Happy hunting!!

[1samu]

how 'bout use another chipset. maybe it'll be better.
and say,  do you all are Game Creator ?

[Ruler of the Dark]

I think the town looks too bland
Try making the houses look better, like this

[Drace]

the trees are to close together

[drenrin2120]

Keep up the good work man! It's your first game, so you're doing good for a newb!

[Calvern]

Yeah i know, sux for now but yeah, very first game soi gonna stay with RTP. then leter on with the game once i get the hang of it will definetly get some new chipsets , chars, etc. And no, last name is not Calvert, sorry 8P




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