My Games... Good or Bad?

[Ruler of the Dark]

I'm making a few games currently, could you guys help me and comment?


GAME 1 - - Crystal of Life

Story: Basically there is a special jewel called the crystal of life. it is in the realm of light, which you need the jewel of light to get into. The badguy wants the crystal, it will make him invincible. he sends his 5 elite shadow warriors to get it. ONe of them, Lloyd, is the one who will assasinate a princess and get the jewel from her. When he gets there the jewel emits a blinding flash and Lloyd loses all his memory.... The castle accepts him as on of them and the story satarts to unfold.......

Characters so far:

-Lloyd
EX-badguy
male
blond hair
blue eyes
dark clothing
swordsman

-Fiona
Princess
female
red hair
brown eyes
prefers blue
rod... er... user?


GAME 2 - - Untitled (based around minigames)

Story: Savon is summoned to a mysterious world and must solve minigames to save it. This is what he is told by Dr. Muo.

Characters:

-Savon
Hero
Male
Blond Hair
Gray Eyes
Caped
No-Weapon

-Mina
Princess
Female
Green hair
Green eyes
green clothes
no-weapon




If these are rejected, more ideas soon...

[oooog]

not to good, not to bad, theyre both meh.  id play em.

[Drace]

what he said

[Neslein]

same... but still... its a bit of a cliché about the jewel of life... but don't bother...