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Offline Bart_Fatima

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I need help making a storyline for my game
« on: September 07, 2004, 11:07:36 PM »
  Okay I remade my Breathe of Roya 12 part saga and here is a short Bio on the Legacies in my game

please someone read it and help me with the storyline
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« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2004, 12:39:19 AM »
don't you think the thing to break the curse is a little too coincidental on how it happened? Or did they know before it happened. Also, "Slayer of God" is awesome!! Is he the main bad guy? If not, he should be.
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« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2004, 08:54:31 AM »
Wow these names are common i've seen them in anime and epsecially xenogears alot.Seemed your were trying to hard to make them uncommon by changing them a little.
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« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2004, 05:10:40 PM »
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Originally posted by AsakuraHao2004
don't you think the thing to break the curse is a little too coincidental on how it happened? Or did they know before it happened. Also, "Slayer of God" is awesome!! Is he the main bad guy? If not, he should be.


1) They knew about the curse
2) and yes The Slayer of GOd is the Main bad guy,
 If you want me to tell you more about him and Fey, just ask
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« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2004, 08:12:51 PM »
what i meant was, did they know how to break the curse beforehand. the way you wrote it seemed like an acceden in one place, and purpously in another.
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« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2004, 08:38:01 PM »
 They did know how to break the curse before hand
they just waited
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« Reply #6 on: September 08, 2004, 08:45:12 PM »
  I am going to add more Families and Characters to my HIstory of Breathe of Roya Soon..I'll get you all updated
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« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2004, 03:40:49 AM »
is a rip off of xenogears, you should make a different title for him.And fey, martial arts, the only real big difference is that his dad was bad at martial arts in your game....XENOGEARS!I understand you like it, but, come on!
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« Reply #8 on: September 09, 2004, 12:19:40 PM »
Yeh really,I mean come on.First you wanted to make a Remake of Xenogears and now your gust completely ripping it off.
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« Reply #9 on: September 09, 2004, 07:23:25 PM »
 The Slayer of GOd Title is from Xenogears but I didn't mean to make the guy sound like Id.
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