Silent Destiny

[Serano65]

Okay here is my idea I have been working on a game called Silent Destiny.  
The following is a brief look at what I have so far. Feel free to help out were ever you think it is needed.

Time setting: Now

Place: a world called  Erutan

Plot :It is about a time when a war between the Humans and the Linxs  (Linxs are a species of cat like hunters, but the only take on a cat like form in battle)

Protagonist, a.k.a. heros:

A young warrior for hire named Mareik who no memory’s of his past.

A young girl named Rose who dreams of seeing the world her people hide from for so long.

A class A Magick Knight named Rock who has traveled the temple of Erutan seeking the counsel of the gods.

A censure of sorts  named Jane seeks trills around ever corner

A traveling warrior named Ace who’s heart is a pure as her temper is short.

Antagonist , a.k.a. Villains:

A evil sprit named fear who only seeks power  and discord

The God of pain a suffering Cacus “ nothing more will be said about him“

The Leader of the linxs named Ordog. He turned his people against the humans in order to satisfy the will
of his god .

A bio mekka soldier named setsuna she is the leader of the B.M. unit and a mindless slave to Ordog.

Gods not listed

Laka goddess of song and dance.
Volcano god of rebirth
Leviathan God of the sea
Ramah God of the storm
Ifrit god of fire
Marduk God of Judgment
Diablos god of  blood
Carbuncle god of reflection
Shiva goddess of destructions

[Xen]

Sounds interesting...
Quite witty too with the Linx race of cat-like people...

This could be quite good...

[Serano65]

i don't know I think it's alright but I may need help i'll post a preview soon i just need to find out how to up load my game.

[Xen]

I'd be willing to help you on this but I need to finish my game too. Just ask and (hopefully) I'll provide the answers.

[Serano65]

arigato gozanimasu

[Red Giant]

I find it dire how the linx only turn into cats during battle. A lack of charsets, I presume?

[Serano65]

cat like  still very human
yes and no to the chara sets I wanted them to only have small things like claws and fangs in battle yet still remain human so to speak. The rest like ears and tails would be in and out of battle. The whole change would be kind of like how vampers only have fangs when tey are ready to kill feed whatever. Then again I did say I may need some help. I've never done this type of thing before and I have no clues as to what is a good or bad when it come to makeing an rpg story for others to play. all i know is what I like, but it is a work in progress.

[Snake Eater]

It sounds awesome! Good Luck!

[akime6]

I like the idea of the Fear spirit, and the various gods/godesses. I'm looking forward to it.

[Serano65]

I have something new tell me if you like it. I was not so sure as to what I should put in the begging of my game so I made 6 scenes for the intro that will effect your states. Kind of a basic training. They are timed and you only get one shot and after they are done you take a test which will be you first battle of the game. This is still just an idea so let me know if I should change anything or even keep it.

[Weregnome]

 

A class A Magick Knight named Rock who has traveled the temple of Erutan seeking the counsel of the gods.

His name Rock sounds fairly stupid. Nothing against u but the name sounds like it is suited for a stupid person. He should have a different name. Just my suggestion. If so maybe something like Zadir
Raiden
Morgio

They are some ideas I got from the top of my head. Use the suggestion if ya want. Doesn't bother me.

[Serano65]

I got the name from fetal fury but I'll think about it.

[Weregnome]

ok thats cool. Fatal Fury is pretty cool but that name.. still... anyway thanks for thinking upon me suggestion.

[Serano65]

Hay if anyone can I need help putting the story together. you see I have a lot of ideas and I kind of now how I want the story to go, but I have naver been a great writer.

[Serano65]

update I have add two more chara shahara an assassin whos skills are only rivaled by her looks and alya the goddess of life. and before I forget mareik is a hlf breed but no one can tell untill latter on in te game and ace is a full blood but she is siding with the humans after an ordel with ordog.
 also I think I will change rocks name to Morgio. thanks Weregnome any help i can get is better then no help.