Tau : Fire Warrior

[Red Fox]

This is my first 100% custom charset. It's a Tau Fire Warrior (warhammer 40k)

Plz tell me what u think about it.

[GhostClown]

Looks, good.

[Red Fox]

REALLY
damn thats cool. Thx

[WarxePB]

It isn't really shaded a lot. And the legs are a bit weird.

But it does look good for your first try.

[White Dwarf]

its alright for your first try, better that mine, and yeh, i would try the legs again

[Red Fox]

Okey. I will try to make the legs again , it was really hard to make them but I try again. Thx .

[White Dwarf]

hey, first trys ARE hard you cant change that, you did quite well with your first try, just keep at it, you'll improve

[Red Fox]

I gave it a try. Better or Worse ?

Now I'am going to try that shading thing.

[Red Fox]

Sorry for dubbel posting but plz tell me how this shading look like.

The one to the right is "shade" and the other one is not

[Red Fox]

SOry for trippling posting but I have finished the charset.
here it is (see attachment).

 

[Red Giant]

Looks too simple to me.
I suggest you seperate the parts out, and add a little more detail and shading.

[White Dwarf]

what he said, but its getting better

[wildguy3922]

Yeah, Red Giant is right. Look at the red on his arms, try to shade it like that, if it helps. Other than that, it's a lot better than what I can do with a custom charset.

[GhostClown]

Well, actually, if your really going to do all of that changing around, I would give the legs some more shape, human like shape, maybe even do the same for some other parts as well.

[Red Fox]

Well I won't do anything more on him . I'am to lazy