Mythic Knights

[lan-the phoenix holder]

well ummmmm please don't fight but sonicchaos7 and sqoud are right not all bad guys do try that but the planet was sort of made in a rush so have any better names please tell but if i should keep it then tell. one last thing don't post cureses.

[Sqoad]

I'm not good at names either but I guess I could give it a shot.....
A planetcan carry many name from Planet a - z or Venus, Mars, Earth... It's so complicated but why don't you try with either think deeply from your heart or I'll try and think the c**p outta me....
I dunno... "Triborn" or "Kradonia" or something... You can also make up a wierd name on a madeup language like "Fellarodia"

Get it? Cuz I barely understand what I'm saying

[baconman]

How come your RPG got more attention than me and Piedude's lol. I guess It was because our's is a fan game. Well, anyways,
w00t to Mythic Knights!

[dragoninja]

I was on a trip for 3 days, If some1 missed me ^^ btw, I thinks the info of the game was ok, a few minor changes could do the trick, well well: Im at your service now Lan

[Sqoad]

Your game sounds really interessting and I can't wait until I can try it As I recall you also needed some inspiration (Just what I heard) and well I am kind of a creative guy so if you need ideas or something I'll see what I can do.

[Drace]

To less informations, to much double posts and a basic story like Sonic says.
Try to make it a little more original, like the evil not trying to take over the world, but let him take over France. I never encountered a game or movie where they wanted to take over France.

[Sqoad]

Well in this case I don't think that France excist in his game... By the way... It was a giid idea! I'll just add that to my game

[Drace]

Yay!
Conquer France: The Game
Finally
Back to topic now.

[charaman]

Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by charaman
Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far

 well what does intricate mean. but what do you mean by the names need work. by the way i made with kyei it is suppose to be spelled Kiye.

[lan-the phoenix holder]

hey dragonninja and Sqoad how about thinking about normal characters that just help the characters in the game. but everyone please explain what you mean

p.s. dragonninja and Sqoad pm me stuff except for game stuff.

[baconman]

As you know, Lan, I was the one who got you interested into 2k3.....I can help you make sprites, backgrounds, title screens, game overs, etc. You know that you can call me at anytime to request something. Make a charset for a character and I will try to improve it. Anyways, w00t for Mythic Knights!  

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by baconman
As you know, Lan, I was the one who got you interested into 2k3.....I can help you make sprites, backgrounds, title screens, game overs, etc. You know that you can call me at anytime to request something. Make a charset for a character and I will try to improve it. Anyways, w00t for Mythic Knights!  

u can definitly help with all that!!!

[charaman]

Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder

quote:

Originally posted by charaman Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far

 well what does intricate mean. but what do you mean by the names need work. by the way i made with kyei it is suppose to be spelled Kiye.

intricate means u should add more to the story, and i mean mroe like the planet name, the people's names are fine. Goodd luckw ith your game!

[lan-the phoenix holder]

Originally posted by charaman

quote:

Originally posted by lan-the phoenix holder quote: Originally posted by charaman Hey. The storys pretty good now, but you could make it a little more intricate, and some of the names need a little work, but god job so far  well what does intricate mean. but what do you mean by the names need work. by the way i made with kyei it is suppose to be spelled Kiye.

intricate means u should add more to the story, and i mean mroe like the planet name, the people's names are fine. Goodd luck with your game!

do u have a name for the planet?