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Offline Weregnome

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« on: February 28, 2005, 11:23:39 AM »
As some may know I write. Of late I have completed two new pieces, one that i am not too happy with (an suspect alot of grammar errors) and another that is the second part of a prologue to my storu (the first part was from One Sweet Moment which can also be found on my DA account)

Here are the links to them.

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I hope you read and respond!
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« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2005, 11:29:19 AM »
sorry i cant read it at the moment, but ill read it later, and i dident know you did storys....cool....anyway ill post again when ive read them...
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« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2005, 11:48:26 AM »
thanks White
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« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2005, 05:25:09 PM »
ok, rea the first one, and the first prolog thingy, GREAT!!!!

i really like, i did spot some places where you missed out some letters, like you puh "is" instead of "his" but i think you just need to re-read it and correct things like that, i love it!! :bend:  :bend:

im just going to start reading the 2nd one, ill edit this post or post again after i read it
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« Reply #4 on: March 01, 2005, 03:23:18 AM »
oki thanks White. I'll go through and edit any mistakes after I have like more responses.
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« Reply #5 on: March 01, 2005, 03:29:32 AM »
Great!
Isn't it ironic that White Dwarf is giving you spelling help? XD
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« Reply #6 on: March 01, 2005, 05:23:21 AM »
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« Reply #7 on: March 01, 2005, 06:54:57 AM »
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Great!
Isn't it ironic that White Dwarf is giving you spelling help? XD

That is single handedly the worst irony in the world, ever.
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« Reply #8 on: March 02, 2005, 05:44:34 AM »
rofl. yer that is.. it is indeed
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« Reply #9 on: March 02, 2005, 08:06:04 AM »
Ok this is a new piece I did.

 Battle of the Three
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