Adventure

[Sqoad]

Yo!

I'm making a game which right now is called "Adventure" since I didn'tcome up with a good name.
You wanted me to write a longer story so now I have updated it.

Story____________________________________________________________________________________________________

"Onikashi" is a normal 16 years old kid (That's what he think) and he has a dream to go out on an adventure and explore the world (which sadly hasn't gotten any name yet, If you come up with a good name tell me) one day he goes home afterday dreaming in the woods when he hear voices  from inside that follows "He is not leaving until he's fully grown" "I'm only taking him for trainning! You know as well as i do that he is not a normal child!"
At a first tought Onikashi thinks that he's only having wierd illusions, But just as he's taking another step furthur to the door he sees an illusion that claims to be himself if he would stay.
Onikashi is convinced that he really is in danger and moves for the gateway out when he's stoped by a man with 3 devil wings and 3 angelwings with three followers that rather looks like crying flames. The Man says: "I'm here to get a... shall we say rather important child from here". Onikashi knows that he's the only son and asks "Who are you? What are you?". The man(Devil Angel) Orders to have Onikashi killed on the spot but just as Devil Angels spell are to hit Onikashi immidietly turns into a furius beast and cut Devil Angel all over the body. Devil Angel didn't die of course but summon a "Black hole" that pulls Onikashi into a strange world of chaos and evil. He finds himself in a prison looking room filled with ember and dust. Every step he takes sounds like the floor is going to break any moment. The air feels dry and gives the scent of torture. Onikashi stands and shakes his head and rubs of the ashes on his shirt "What am I actually?" He thinks for himself and searches for a way out. Onikashi founds a hole in the wall that he enters. It seems to lead to a long corridor not to fifferent from his cell. Jenna who Onikashi meets earlier in the cell has already escaped and wants to race Onikashi to the end of the "Dark Realm" but on their way out the meet up with a really ugly company and is forced to fight their way out.
Onikashi ans Jenna disbands and are sent to different parts of the world... Or is it really the world Onikashi is from? Onikashi is teleported to a pool in a kingdom where he meets up with young and beautyful Rachel that in the first moment thinks Onikashi has sneaked in. Onikashi now finds himself in a rather unpleasent situation between execution or work as a slave... But Who is He? What is he? And why is he what he are? That can Onikashi only findout on his adventure to solve the misterius secret behind him...

Following characters____________________________________

Onikashi Kekoshin, 16. Birth date(BD) 6th October
Onikashi is a quiet and stupid type that easily puts his mind on something else, He's also very honest and says what he thinks or when he thinks it... This is a trouble when he tries to make an impression on the girl in his life...

Rachel Yoamu, 16. BD 15th June
Rachel is actually a princess that Onikashi meet by mistake  in the royal swimming pool. He is not very shy and keeps quite alot of secrets and tells other hints on what it is, However she and Onikashi has a thing or two incommon, Love for eachother(though she never shows it) and a bond thhat keeps making them meet eachother in unsiuteble times.

Ryu Shinokabu, 245/3795 Something between that age. BD no one knows when an Angel is born...
Ryu is an aggresive and stubborn guy for being an Angel and is also a super pervert. He enjoys using his skills to see some goodies (But Onikashi and Rachel is still working on making him stop) Ryu has held a secret for so long that he can barely remember what it was and Onikashi is the only one to know. Ryu seems to be an holy Angel but when the truth comes from his mouth he has summoned chaos ans missery over some part over the world. Still much is unknown of him.

Jenna the beastman, 30. BD 30 July
Jenna is a Beastman and has an aggresive attitude. She has tried to kill Ryu several times but since he's an Angel he can't die(Not permanently atleast) Whenever she is spoken to she declares a fight (as long as Rachel isn't around) Even though her rather frightening attitude she can also be very sweet and social, But that would be when she is drunk or just isn't conciuns. After Onikshi beated her in a (Un)fair fight she has started to drink quite alot of alcoholic, No one knows exactly why though.

Horatio Cosius, 67. BD 15 September
Horatio is a warrior veteran and a drunkard. He started his carrier as a town guard, but because of his extreme muscle mass theychoosed for him to be a warrior. Since he did his job so well he got to stop at the age of 53 and his carrier was over. He tried to get another job and became a Merchant with a large earning. When he bacame 66 a large Spider took his leg (Not bite it off) and he can now only walk slowly. Since Onikashi wants to go fast they often start fighting until someone either gets tired or someone stops them. Onikashi likes to call him Santa Clause or Old man Cosius (Horatio dusn't like any of it).


Jakob Darkrose, 134/2485 something between that age. BD Just like Ryu... No one knows when an Angel is born.
Jakob is a real smartass and a true friend. He tried to change his life for Onikashi's but Onikashi denied it and got out of trouble his own way. Jabob is a young looking boy that is to kind for his own good. His father is an elder sage and his mother is a (Super hot babe if you ask Ryu) high priestess in the holy Cathedral. Jakob's dream is to pure the world from evil and get a girlfriend (But who'd want a loser he asks himself) Jakob is so to say a really kind boy.


Devil Angel(name is not given), Either he's about 54 or he has lived from the beggining. No one knows for sure. Bd No one knows
Devil Angel(DA) Wants to destroy the world and everything on it. He's a man off hates and destruction. Some says that he has a sad story behind this and is a good man from deep inside. Now  DA is capturing people like Onikashi and uses their power to gain power himself. He'll later use it to destroy everything that excists, Even himself. Onikashi will later on take the task to destroy him once and for all.

Well that's about it and if you have any complaints just post them.

[lan-the phoenix holder]

sounds cool but what is the myterious place and is the main guy a beast or human?

[Sqoad]

sounds cool but what is the myterious place and is the main guy a beast or human?

Onikashi is more of a human possesed by an inner demon(If I told you the name you would only get bored and think "Ah well I know his secret now I'm finished with the game") the strange world is named the "Dark Realm" which later is connected to (You'll see when the demo is released) Onikashi only wishes for one thing, Which is followed in a poet like way: "I'm not a human and not a beast" "I'm not normal and I'm not different" "I'm not alone and I'm not surrounded" "I'm not a Devil and I'm not a Saint" "I'm not a Peasant and I'm not Royal" "What am I?"

Something like that.....
I'll tell you more when something comes up (Since I started with the game yesterday )

PS. I'll post pics soon, When you say it, I like pie to!

[Darkfox]

 

PS. When you say it, I like pie to!

Yes, pie is good.

 

(Since I started with the game yesterday )

My greatest project is around 5 years old and I'm still developing it.

[Sqoad]

Keep up the good work! We are all just kids and novice so we take more time on os Final Fantasy takes 3 - 5 years sinced they are about 100 men working on the game, heehee

[GhostClown]

Sounds like you only told us one conversation in the woods.. We need story line, man!

[lan-the phoenix holder]

oh now i sort of got it.

[Sqoad]

If you want more of the story it would probably be the best to PLAY the game first since I've told you the whole intro already, But if you want to hear more I'll add it on the top.

and.... I don't know how to post games.......

[dragoninja]

His game is not completed yet...so why should he post it anyway...

[Sqoad]

Since a game could be fun to test BEFORE it's released I find it very good reason to post it as soon as I have fixed some stuff

PS. I'll post screenys soon

[Sqoad]

After quite sometimes now my game has crashed(I can still test it) But now it's the end.... Nothing works as planned and I'll have to start over I'm afraid.... The game Adventure will be deleted.

PS. No need to feel sorry. It happens all the time

[Eternal Darkness]

So sorry it didn't work it looked like a good game, hope you get to make another just as good as that one sounded

[dragoninja]

Naw he11 no... If he stops making that game I'll kill him, I've played the demo and it looked really good. I'm gonna make him keep working on it  

[ENDLESSHEARTX]

This game seems well thought out, but you honestly need a better title than Adventure. Don't make the story too complicated either, because you are going to confuse people trying to follow the games story.

[dragoninja]

The bastard stoped anyway!!!