My short stories

[VulcanRaven336]

It is a good Idea, Chara's books stories:)
But someone else made a thread and everyone is posting there stories there. . .
Oh well, I will post mine here:)

[Darkfox]

I meant to say second person, you don't have to be a jerk about it. Gosh...

[VulcanRaven336]

[2] The angel of death


We were running, running as fast as we could. There were 3 of us, me and two of my friends. We ran through the dirty forest, we ran away from her. I kept running, ignoring the burning sensation inside my chest. I looked back, no matter how fast we ran she was right behind us. I felt I could'nt take it no more, so I hid behind a small bush. I looked to see if she was still behind us. . .
Where were my friends? I could not see them anywhere! She was now walking towards me, I could see her hideous face, Pale white skin and dark black hair. I started running again, this time it was a hill I climbed up. It was getting steeper, and steeper and now I had to actually climb it. There were skulls everywhere, half buried in the dirt. I continued to climb, not looking back when suddenly I reached the top. There was a. . . . . Truck. A candy brown truck, but not shiny, but an old truck. Exhausetd and out of breath, I leaned over on the side of the truck. taking deep breaths, I looked to the left and I saw the unexpected.
A woman, not just any woman but a very beautiful woman. She had Bright-golden hair, a beautiful face, and a nice curved body. I looked in disfelief, as she slowly, very slowly leaned towards me.
I was hypnotized, hypnotized by her beauty and I couldn't look away from her eyes. She leaned very close to my face, then her lips touched mine. I closed my eyes as she began to kiss me slowly. She kissed me for a while, then I felt a sharp pain on the side of my head. I opened my eyes and saw spots of blood not on the same beautiful face I have kissed, but on a hideous pale-white face. I began to feel dizzy, I reach for the side of my head and felt something deep in my skull. I fainted and fell to the ground, remembering a beautiful face.

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(I actually dreamed this)

[Dragonium]

That's creepy, I had a dream pretty similar to that a few weeks ago. In my dream I was running away from something, I dunno what it was, but I was running down the road to my house at night. There's a bend on it where a tree leans over the road and you can't see round the bend, and I could here it there. I got to my house, and there was this girl there. To cut a long story short, kissed her, then this noise came behind me, something hit me in the side, I woke up and my ribs hurt.

Anyway, I like it. Try to work on the description, though. My Eng teacher complains if I don't.

[Red Giant]

Originally posted by Dragonium
Much as we dare, nobody wants to be the first to call Red a n00b.

That;s odd, because I thought a noob was a new member who acted in a stupid or foolish manner. I thought that, in correcting somebody, you would be identified as not a noob.
But hey, what do I know? I'm not a moderator.

[Darkfox]

Wait a minute I thought... LOL!!

[Drace]

Good, better than the first one. It gave me some shivers, or it was the nightly spring cold here in Holland at 2 AM (or PM, whatever the one is for night)
I'll also post one soon, but I need to make it better and not my sucky half english writing.

[Weregnome]

tats pretty good m8. Like the second one, I read abit of the first, thats was pretty good. as someone once mentioned a short story thread would be good to have. I'll post the stories I've done and inserted onto my  deviant art account

[VulcanRaven336]

[3] The two moons

  It was two A.M. in the morning, and I couldn't sleep. I layed awake in my bed, thinking and looking out the window. I saw the northern moon and very beautiful it was. I looked at the southern moon and very beautiful it was. The northern moon seemed to be attracted to the southern moon, the two moons have fallen in love. Slowly, they began to move. Little by little the Northern moon was closer to the Southern Moon. I watched as the two moons, began to pick up speed. The speed now seemed great, for they were going to crash against each other. Then there was a loud bang, The milky-white moon had crashed against the golden-yellow moon. I saw a wave go from the crash coming down to me. The wave passed me and a strong wind blew at me.
I looked up once more and was shocked. I ran outside and looked up. There were large chunks of rocks spraying everywhere from the crash site. I stared in desbelief, then suddenly I heard a crash in my room. A chunk of the moons had crashed through my roof and into my bedroom. I grew afraid, I ran away as fast as I could. no where in perticular, but away. Large clouds of dust were rising everywhere. From those clouds of dust, some kind of liquid oozed out. I kept running, my chest was burning intensly and my legs weighted a thousand pounds. Tears were forming in my eyes as I finally gave up. I fell into some black liquid and I sank. I sank down, down into it. I opened my eyes and saw nothing but black, black everywhere. Running out of breath fast, I struggled to surface, but the liquid was to thick. I finally gave up, and yelled at the top of my lungs. Once more, I looked up through the black liquid, in the sky, there were two moons. Then I finally gave out.


This story is sort of weird. I dreamt this also, but added to it. I don't know why I wrote it, bu meh. Read it and tell me what'sup?

EDIT: Weregonme, your link does not work.

[MSlash67]

I like this story, it is scary as hell. The two moons collide and the the liquid engulfed the main character sending him to his doom. kewl

[VulcanRaven336]

Nah not scary, more like stupid. . .

Oh well, I haven't stopped writting, there's this story I am writting right now, I am not going to write it on here but on live journal. Here's the link if you wanna read it.

http://www.livejournal.com/users/vulcanraven336/


That's just the first intro chapter, read it and tell me what you think is going to happen next?
I have the second chapter all ready, I just forgot it in my damn note book at school:)