Nightmare Recast

[Megasxlr]

Ok, so I tweaked my story (a lot) and I think the new story is a lot better. Here it is:

Dison, the hero of the story, had been having nightmares ever since he was found washed up on the beach a year ago. He thinks the nightmares are part of a twisted past that he can't remember due to amnesia. One day, he wakes up from a nightmare and discovers his villiage on fire. He, being the lone survivor, decides to search for answers to his past, and a way to save his future.

[GLOW]Characters[/GLOW] -

Dison
Age - 16
Bio - A young man who lost his memory in a shipwreck. After the villiage that took him in got burned down, he decided to search for answers to his past.

Tobugo
Age - 23
Bio - A very strong man who knew Dison as a shipmate. He had tried to save Dison in the shipwreck, but to no avail. He decides to help Dison when he finds out he has amnesia, and blames it on himself.

Zack
Age - 16
Bio - A young prophet, Zack finds out a terrible fate for the world, and Dison's role in it. He seeks out Dison to help save the planet.

Tao
Age - 15
Bio - A very headstrong mage who decides to team up with Dison when he saves her life. She is powerful, but sometimes messes up her spells.

Odin
Age -
Status - Enemy
Bio - A bounty hunter who took a vow to kill Tobugo at all costs after Tobugo screwed up an attempt to capture a bounty that would have made Odin very, very rich.

Terror
Age -
Status - Main Enemy
Bio- Self-dubbed as the 'End', Terror will stop at nothing to gain control over Dison and his hidden powers, so he could shape the world as he likes.

Setting - Parlacia
A very vast planet that has been at war for a year. People playing this game could expect an 20-24 hour game, just by looking at the size of the world. This world has many secrets that can only be aqquired by unlocking certain things (Just like FF7).


 

[Linkforce]

sounds petty good.  i like the names.  but the memory loss thing and seeking out past thing is kind of overdone... still sounds exciting!

[AngelFeather]

I really think your story is fasinating.

[Megasxlr]

The reason Dison searches for answers is because the nightmares he's been having were about his past. He want's to know what happened and to see if he can get his memory back. One of his nightmares is of the villiage itself burning up. That is what prompts him to look for answers.