Game Poster

[Zerlina]

Here.

The eyes are borrowed just so you know.

Enjoy the design? Tagline ok?

[MrMister]

Tagline = makes me not want to play, sounds generically.
Other **** = random.

[Kijuki_Magazaki]

Now now mr mr dun just throw it off like that. I do actually see her idea. Though I, besides pointing outsome flaws and good criteria, will give you some pointers, that in my opinion may help you abit.

I actually liked the tagline however the position and horizontal spacing of it it's abit akward. To maybe fix this problem you might want to either: make the text expand a bit sideways so the spacing looks diminished.

Another flaw might be unbalance shown without a stable element to support it( i am talking about the top part). If you split this from the middle, you can see what I am talking about.  .... ok maybe you might not so i'lll show a pic


To correct this you might want to try balancing by either ( a bit of brightness on theright side, ro a bit more "activity" on the right side.

Also too much negative spacing BUT it may be something you want to portray an idea, but currently is being a bit unaffective, or not reaching. You may want to brighten up the eyes/face or even the whole picture you have there so there actually a contrast and the negative..ness feels "comfortable".

I REALLY like your text logo for the game i find quite cool XD

I hope you dont get an agressive feeling from me <.< If at all i am softing what mr mr implemented o.0 I'll check up on this. xP

[Zerlina]

Thank you very much for the feedback, Kijuki. How's this?

[Kijuki_Magazaki]

nice, you may prlly noted, but it seems "easier" to see.

ok i'll give u another suggestion. lighten up the eyes abit. so they stand out a bit/ not just enough so they stand out, that way you'll have a better focal point.