M K (MageKnight)

[Meiscool-2]

OMG, take care of this bug lonewolf!

[Fang_of_blades]

(*looks at page and tilts head* what the? )
anyways here are face pictures for Kiba and Lina (within the next 2 posts since i can only post 1 pic at a time) Kiba's is pretty much perfect ^_^

[Fang_of_blades]

ok here is Lina's face, very good but if anyone can recolor her hair that would be good, it just neds to be a little bit more lavendar/blueish/grayish just a bit though so that it matches her charset also some elf ears ^_^ , and arch, if you can do char battle sets i would like you to do one for kiba and lina please (uses his hands to cast magic as i said before, Lina uses a bow and arrow when she fights but mostly casts magic and uses both hands for this, a big thanks in advance)
also one more detail, meiscool i'm redoing the map i'll post it in a bit i'd like your oppinion on the redone map at least compared to the first time i posted it (i promise it's better)

[Fang_of_blades]

sorry but i have a picture of the redone map, meiscool and anyone else tell me what ya think and if its better than the first time i made it (page2) ^_^ and thanks for the tip link meiscool.
(side note it still isn't completely done but it has birds, fish, bunnies, foxes, and butterflies)

[YankeePaladin]

Wow, that's a really nice map! Cool story too.

[Fang_of_blades]

bumping this because i've been working on it (slowly i'm sorry to say, been working very hard latly as i need the cash) in anycase the charset for Kiba before is being changed as i oversighted the fact that it's a tall charset and i needed it to be a medium, Thanks lots to lonewolf who is working on it for me ^_^

i take critism well so if anyone sees something they don't like or that could be done better let me know, any info helps me to get better, i'll be posting what i do here right now i'm working on maps.

[Fang_of_blades]

updateing on it, however when my computer recently crashed i lost the  battle charset for Kiba >.< along with some music, hopefully i can find (and recolor) it all again >.> overall the game is about .5% to 1% done (at least i think anyways ^_^;; )

[Fang_of_blades]

also for anyone waiting for anything more about MageKnight, i had a bunch of edits i did myself (mostly color) but i had the battle chars for the main char and about 90% of the enemies along with 60-70% of the sound, however a virus hit my system so, being sneaky and decent with comps, i keep a second hard drive just for that, put that in and took everything off the original hard drive to reformat it and reload xp back to it (i take the spare HD out when i do that >.>) and when i put the spare back in to take everything off it the spare's hard disk was cracked >.<; and i didn't have time to burn a back up of any of it, so i'll have to do it all again and find it all again (to a point as i still have about 60-70% of what i had before the spare went bad >.> it's a good thing i save things periodicaly... )

(posted this in the intro as well but i figured i'd post it here as well since it's info about my game and why i haven't updated for a while.)

[Fang_of_blades]

now that i'm back, and my comp is working again, i can finnaly get back to working on my game, i should have the time to devote to it after thanksgiving since my family is coming to my house for it >.<

i'll be looking to make a small team or group to help me with it since i would like to see a good running demo of it sometime in my life @.@;

i'll be posting for the help or team in the request forum.

[drenrin2120]

Sorry dude, but someone needs to say this.

Your map is not very good. It's very squarish and out of proportion. Plus the chip isn't used very well. Your storylnie seems a tad random, pointless, and pretty boring. She gets kidnapped by a ninja? Fighting a metal tank? What time frame are we in where tanks and ninja can EVER be put into the same paragraph??

Sorry dude, I know you've been working a long time on it with little input from others, buuut, that's how I feel about this game.

But hey, I'm not a complete asswipe. Smooth out the bumps in your story, develop a main conflict for the hero to deal with throughout the game, of course that can change and blah blah blah... all that literary crap. Then read some mapping tuts. Any game can become a good game with a little elbow grease.

[Meiscool-2]

Not to burst your bubble, but I doubt people will help you. Most have their own games to worry about.

[Fang_of_blades]

thank you for the critisism ^_^
yes i know i need help with mapping (Meiscool made that Very clear in the begining, and thanks for the tuts btw meis.)
i should probly edit the begining bit so that the story makes more sense to people, (seeing as to how i have the complete story all writen up, however trying not to give spoilers does make it seem random i admit. and about ninja's and tanks, if ya take a look at the american FF3 shadow is a ninja, and they had tanks there too ... not all games based off irl are the best, and while mine is more based towards medievil era, it does strech a bit. if you have any more critisism's, let me know, it tells me what to work on so thanks  

and it may take me a day or 2 to post a good begining storyline for people to see. but i will explain things a bit better there.

and Meiscool, i don't really know if anyone will, it's compeltely up to them, and yes i know lots of people have their own games, the best i can hope for is to ask at least, if people say no well then at least i asked, and i will then continue to do my best with the skills i have.
----------edited the front and intro to this forum, edited the sotry and chars section, and since i ended up loseing some data which included the map ya see in here i'll be redoing it completely.----

[elf wind]

Cool story line, and I think that mixing past and future elements is a good idea as you said FF6 did and it was a great game, as was FF7 and FF8 and FF10 for that matter! I agree about the map critism's thou, when meis said about it being to square it now seem's to be kinda triangleish where the trees are if you know what i mean, jagged edges although you proberlly chnged it by now

[Fang_of_blades]

to be honest elf wind i lost the maps when my comp crashed, so i'm going to have to completely redo them, which is good for me anyways, (lol from square to triangle) yeah my previous maps suck, but as i go along i'll get better, espcially if i have good critics ^_^

i won't be working on it much this week due to thanksgiving.
Hell Angel is now working with me on the midi's, Thanks Hell Angel ^_^

[Fang_of_blades]

ok, it's been a while since i updated anything for my game, but news is here, i have Completely redone the 2 first stage maps, however i haven't much time now to post them, (and i may not until i'm done moving to california) however, i will post them when i'm done for you All to criticize or tell me what ya think of em. (if they suck or not is completely irrelivent as i am not the worlds best mapper, but i am getting better with practice though i'm no Mic yet... )



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ok, since i'm back and i'll have some time off soon, i'm going to bring this back, and hopefully within 2 weeks i will be able to post some new pics, if not then it might have to wait a month for some of the new pics.