MY FIRST COMIC

[Conan Edigawa]

i made my first comic.......... it sucks it needs alot of improvement

[Osmose]

At least it makes SOME sense compared to others I've seen, but your new to making sprite comics, it's not ur fault.

First suggestion is MAKE YOUR BACKGROUNDS FIRST before you make anything else. That way those lines won't appear over the people.

Next, work on a speech bubble that looks really good and then just copy and paste it whenever you need it. Enlarge when needed.

Also, try to make it make more sense, cause it's kinda... messed up and random. And the jokes need a bit more work, sadly.

But compared to many tries I've seen by some, it is pretty good. You got the frames, the sprites, the dialogue, all the basics. Just refine em a bit and you'll be set

[Drace]

Evryone steals Trevlac, Sai'kar, Darwin idea. Noted

[Red Giant]

Originally posted by Drace
everyone steals my 'use battlechars for a comic idea'

Dude, a TON of people did that before you. Trevlac, Sai'kar, Darwin, (and if you count animated) Warxe, Darkfox and Razor.

On topic, I think your jokes are way too childish. I mean, come on, your momma jokes? It's not funny. Act your supposed age.

[Darkfox]

Don't be afraid of putting random slapstick things into the mix. And yeah, yo momma jokes are seriously old.

[Conan Edigawa]

i was bored and i made that in 5 min i will try harder next time, i was planning to make comics that are more serious

[MrMister]

More serious? The reason people read crappy webcomics is because they're funny! AGH!

[Conan Edigawa]

no, i meant not to be too silly