Final Time

[Vid]

Its my game ive bien working on for like ages but at the moment its only 5 seconds long    

 The Story

In A Hiddin Base Men were making Monsters (Biological Wepons) To use for wars to take over everyone these men would sell thier wepons for cash they worked for the president of Cryton A Very Powerful City This is where they was bieng made it was the year 2010 the technology went through the roof by now and the monsters were all destroyed as they were uncontrolable but then  the people they sold them to Still had loads and started attacking everyone they named themselves the DeadMocks and everyone needed to try and defend themselves nearly every city was destroyed every soldier went to Cryton to make a last stand while everyone else ran the city was destroyed.

Meanwhile for thousands of years some People With powers kept Powerful Crystals each With The Power Of 1 element each they used these to wipe out the world races the crystals powered 1 powerful one to destroy everything but it cant go in water then once used the powers kick in from fire coming out of the sky all the way to an ice age this all happens in one night the final one the ice age lasts for ages but why do this? because it is thier job to save The Plant Earth From Destruction when a race gets too cleaver technology and starts a very big war they kill the race thats what they did to the dinosaurs. But You would think they were stupid they had no Technology but you would be wrong these people destroyed every piece of evidence by using the main one to blow everything away to hide it they do this and anouther race is born and when the same happers they will die too but eventaly the dinosaues will be reborn in evolution.

Back at the city a big monster with a powerful beam coming out its mouth got hit by a missile moved its head up and hit the crystal destroying it so its power would be realeshed but it had a different affect now and teleported some people to the future killing some and some others survived in the normal time age these people made it against the law to use technology to stop the same happerning again and the god powered people let them live because of it.

Characters that got teleported

Name: David
Age:20
History: Parents went missing when david was young so he joined the army atr the age of 15! he was let in as he liad about his age

Name: Jack
Age: Unknown
History: Unknown

Name:Peter
Age:20
History: Unknown

Name:Becky
Age:20
History: a normal girl that was bright and had a good job planned!

Thats all the characters for now!

there are many extra submissions

*If you join a army or make your own you can fight battle (Final fantasy Crystal cronics i think its called but anyway its for the GBA!) each man is worth 10 or somin the citys you conquer you may rebuild and live there
* a lot more but im still writing them down! coming soon!

Phew Confusing huh

Edited~ I Forgot to add the ending! When they 1st wake up after bieng sent thro time there memory has slowed down and it takes time to remember their history but jack cant keep his sanity and goes mad and trys to destroy the world peter joins him and david fights them with becky and others. they kill peter but jack kills Becky david kills him goes back a day before the war broke out on Cryton and has to come up with a plan to save them of corse all the members are alive because none of that has happened but then Jack And Peter Die Fighting! as thje monster gets killed before he blows the crystal up and David then gets killed after them the presadent blows a nuke and kills himself and the deadMocks Becky is the only charecter that you use that survives with some other people and they make technology illegal and they contine to live happly ever after! So what you think can you belife the main character dies oh yeh! i bet thta has never happerend on anything else before sounds good do ya think?

[Eternal Newb]

Pretty Confusing but I like it.


Is the story like they are trying to get back to there own time or what...(samurai jack?)

[Vid]

Thanks!
Kinda yeh they have to get back to their own time and stop the past from repeating its self by beating the enermy without getting send thro time again

it will be easyer to understand when ive finished it for people to play!

[Nandez]

Originally posted by Vid
Thanks!
Kinda yeh they have to get back to their own time and stop the past from repeating its self by beating the enermy without getting send thro time again

it will be easyer to understand when ive finished it for people to play!

Eternal was right does sound like Samurai Jack.

[Vid]

What do you lot think of my title i was gonna call it Lost technology but Final Time sounds beter anyway its in my signiture!

[Vid]

At Nandez

Yeh i guess it sounds like it but didnt he do missions for people to get out or somin Soz i havent watched it since i was about 12 or somin bad memory

Anyway how do you get my demo up on here?

[Vid]

Oh yeh better edit the 1st post At The End Of The Game The Hero Dies Along With Jack And Peter And Becky Dies before they even get back to the presant time! i'll explain in more detail on the 1st post

Note To Me: Sort out 1st post its a mess

Does anyone know how to get screenshots up on here or whatever you call um?of my game?

[Eternal Newb]

I could make you a better title if you wanted me to...

[Vid]

Originally posted by Eternal Newb
I could make you a better title if you wanted me to...

Thanks if you would do that it would be great and i would give you credit of course